We have started writing a book about our last 23 years of swinging. How we got into it. The clubs and the meets.
The question is can the book have all the details. Things like he was coming in my mouth I just keep swallowing
As he was coming more and more. As I sat on another man's face.
Or should it be both of them showed me a good time. You get our point. Thanks |
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"Depends on whether you're writing porn or describing a scene. Detail is good until it obscures the main point."
Trying to make the book about us and the swinging part of our life. How we change with age and the things we do. Sex has been a big part of that for us. From straight to bi. Sub to Dom. Could do it without the details but they show a point . Thanks for any help. |
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"We have started writing a book about our last 23 years of swinging. How we got into it. The clubs and the meets.
The question is can the book have all the details. Things like he was coming in my mouth I just keep swallowing
As he was coming more and more. As I sat on another man's face.
Or should it be both of them showed me a good time. You get our point. Thanks"
All the gorey details please  |
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It's the style of the writing that's most important, IMO. Sex can be written about in many ways, including erotica, scientific academia, graphic novel and more. It's probably good to have one tone, more or less throughout. Thus I'd plan your book according to how you'd best write it, as well as what you'd anticipate your readers would expect. |
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"i'd check if its allowed to be published being triple x rated content"
Seems quite easy to self publish and sell books online these days (A to Z seems a popular vehicle for this?) This way you’d keep more profit but you’d be responsible for proof reading, marketing/advertising. Mrs SW |
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For me it would be about what your aim is for the reader. Are you aiming to titillate or be factual. Do you want your book to be seen as erotica or factual? If you put in sexually stimulating words you might put some off. In the other hand that may be others idea of a good read. Ultimately you decide what you want for the book. I suspect most on this forum would enjoy it as more erotica. |
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