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By *yrdwomanWoman
over a year ago
Putting the 'cum' in Eboracum |
"Do you want feedback on your profile or on your post?
Either... surprise me  "
You're profile does not make you sound bitchy. It is very long though so I'd be surprised if most people read it all the way through. You might have used the wrong 'discrete/discreet', and the warning at the end is useless. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Do you want feedback on your profile or on your post?
Either... surprise me
You're profile does not make you sound bitchy. It is very long though so I'd be surprised if most people read it all the way through. You might have used the wrong 'discrete/discreet', and the warning at the end is useless."
Oooo ty shall correct... I know its long but ah well puts those with less stamina off
Anddddd put the warning on cause everyone does and im a sheep!! |
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By *yrdwomanWoman
over a year ago
Putting the 'cum' in Eboracum |
"Do you want feedback on your profile or on your post?
Either... surprise me
You're profile does not make you sound bitchy. It is very long though so I'd be surprised if most people read it all the way through. You might have used the wrong 'discrete/discreet', and the warning at the end is useless.
Oooo ty shall correct... I know its long but ah well puts those with less stamina off
Anddddd put the warning on cause everyone does and im a sheep!! "
Unfortunately it doesn't put them off, they just don't read it and message you anyway. And Fab FAQs state the warning is pointless so may as well go. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Ok, I read it.
No you dont sound like a bitch in it at all
However, its very one sided and you come across as a little selfish. Its 'you will be this, you will do that, i expect this' etc. It explicitly details what you're looking for, but very little on what you bring to the party (so to speak) apart from the fact that you're a good 'sub' if you like the person you're with. Same with expecting someone to pay for hotel costs if they cannot accommodate - yet you cannot accommodate either.
All of the above is given as an honest critique and is said with the utmost respect. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Ok, I read it.
No you dont sound like a bitch in it at all
However, its very one sided and you come across as a little selfish. Its 'you will be this, you will do that, i expect this' etc. It explicitly details what you're looking for, but very little on what you bring to the party (so to speak) apart from the fact that you're a good 'sub' if you like the person you're with. Same with expecting someone to pay for hotel costs if they cannot accommodate - yet you cannot accommodate either.
All of the above is given as an honest critique and is said with the utmost respect."
Yes I understand that and thanks however it is written honestly and designed to out time wasters. It is about what I want because its my profile. I think womens profiles are written differently than mens in general as men tend to sell themselves... |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Ok, I read it.
No you dont sound like a bitch in it at all
However, its very one sided and you come across as a little selfish. Its 'you will be this, you will do that, i expect this' etc. It explicitly details what you're looking for, but very little on what you bring to the party (so to speak) apart from the fact that you're a good 'sub' if you like the person you're with. Same with expecting someone to pay for hotel costs if they cannot accommodate - yet you cannot accommodate either.
All of the above is given as an honest critique and is said with the utmost respect.
Yes I understand that and thanks however it is written honestly and designed to out time wasters. It is about what I want because its my profile. I think womens profiles are written differently than mens in general as men tend to sell themselves... "
Then if its written honestly, expresses what you want to, in such a manner that it imparts to the reader a sense of who they could potentially meet, then its exactly what you need it to be and I wouldn't worry about what others may think!
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You don't sound like a Bitch but it is a very "strong" profile.
It's not one I would go for to be honest, but it is very specific, so it should narrow down your inbox onslaught!!! 
Ben |
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Yes I understand that and thanks however it is written honestly and designed to out time wasters. It is about what I want because its my profile. I think womens profiles are written differently than mens in general as men tend to sell themselves... "
It will out genuine guys too
So you feel men should sell themselves and women shouldn't ?
Why would I want to meet someone who wants it all their own way and wants to put minimum effort in to achieve it ?
I just wouldn't and I dare say there are a lot of genuine men and couples who think the same.
So, bitch ? No
Demanding and self absorbed, probably
Thinks because she has tits and a fanny she can get away with it, definately |
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