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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Looking for some Pointers / Constructive Criticism ???
I’m not looking to tread on peoples toes or start arguments with fellow fabster’s,
Just looking for some help to possibly get some success (If Any On Here)
Cheers In Advance  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Ummmm it appears quite not aggressive ..but .. it certainly ismy warm friendly and inviting ...
Also the first part.. this isn't a dating site ..so I don't think you need to describe who you are ... what about sexual preferances? ? What are you into sexually? . What would make me or others read it and think ooooofffff I'd love to meet him? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Also .. you say you send out messages to start that consist of "hey how are things with you lately " .... when you revive 500 messages a day ...that doesn't stand out and so likely hood is it would get deleted ... you have stated that those that delete lack in intelligence? I would say this would put people off your profile potentially. . It could juse be that they are totally bored with hundreds of unoriginal hey how are you messages? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The good points..
You don't have loads of cock pics.
The bits we don't like...
It reads as a fairly aggressive profile.
Good luck op in getting answers/suggestions that'll help. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You mention people's intelligence or lack of on more than one occasion - totally agree with the other comments you don't come across as warm and friendly and I think you will struggle to get the replies you are looking for with this text |
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Your profile says that people delete without reading, two reasons, they get shitloads of mail, and maybe, just maybe, you aren't what they are looking for?
Your profile is aggressive, it comes across as having a very "high handed" attitude, you seem to think you are better than most other people on here, and insulting to everyone who dares to pass you by.
Overall, about as welcoming as a shit sandwich.  |
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By *aut-eWoman
over a year ago
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OP I think your profile will have a lot of people averting their eyes and maybe even hitting that block button before you get the chance to. In my opinion I think you may wish to try a different approach and definitely listen to the advice already given by the much more experienced fabbers, they have been here a lot longer and know what makes a good profile & a great swinger |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Also .. you say you send out messages to start that consist of "hey how are things with you lately " .... when you revive 500 messages a day ...that doesn't stand out and so likely hood is it would get deleted ... you have stated that those that delete lack in intelligence? I would say this would put people off your profile potentially. . It could juse be that they are totally bored with hundreds of unoriginal hey how are you messages?"
Cheers tits4tats, I will start changing my messages  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"The good points..
You don't have loads of cock pics.
The bits we don't like...
It reads as a fairly aggressive profile.
Good luck op in getting answers/suggestions that'll help. "
Thank you both Delightful 2, I will adjust my profile accordingly |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"You mention people's intelligence or lack of on more than one occasion - totally agree with the other comments you don't come across as warm and friendly and I think you will struggle to get the replies you are looking for with this text "
Thank you missyk, I will try and make it a bit more warm and friendly for others. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Your profile says that people delete without reading, two reasons, they get shitloads of mail, and maybe, just maybe, you aren't what they are looking for?
Your profile is aggressive, it comes across as having a very "high handed" attitude, you seem to think you are better than most other people on here, and insulting to everyone who dares to pass you by.
Overall, about as welcoming as a shit sandwich. "
Thank you _thwalescpl
I know that the male to female ratio on here is astronomically crazy and I do feel for the females on here with the amount of messages that they get along with the abusive one’s too,
Thank you for pointing out the attitude bit, But I don’t regard myself in any way higher than anyone else what so ever, In fact I’m more of the quite one in the corner minding my own business,
Fair point with the “insulting”, I’ll take of the “intelligents” part then. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Tbh with you you're coming across as a bit of a dick and very insulting... I'm very straight to the point as well lol. Seriously consider a complete rewrite dude. "
Thanks Max-Banging
Looks like i will have to do complete rewrite. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"OP I think your profile will have a lot of people averting their eyes and maybe even hitting that block button before you get the chance to. In my opinion I think you may wish to try a different approach and definitely listen to the advice already given by the much more experienced fabbers, they have been here a lot longer and know what makes a good profile & a great swinger "
Thank you _aut-e
I'll definitely have to try a different approach, I am down for the Singles Social on 8th September, Hopefully this will help too ?
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Make it warm..friendly ... and try to stand out for the others
Tell us what your into ..why should we want to meet you..What can you offer ...
Send polite messages but not hey how are you
Good luck |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Make it warm..friendly ... and try to stand out for the others
Tell us what your into ..why should we want to meet you..What can you offer ...
Send polite messages but not hey how are you
Good luck "
Thanks again tits4tats
When i attend my first single social that things will hopefully change  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Saying that people earn an imstant block by not replying.... is that meant to make them think "oh fuck I'd better reply:?? Else I don"t see the point of putting it |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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May I give a complete apology to everyone who helped me with my first profile, (What a load of shit it was)
I have completely reworked it now and I hope that it is a lot more warm / welcoming and appealing than the last? 
Thanks Again In Advance
Antony |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Much better now OP
Nothing to apologize for....it's rare people actually take the advice they ask for on here "
Thank you to MissP69
But i do feel that i need to apologize as i must of come over as a complete at utter knob 
Hopefully i'll get noticed at the Single Social on 8th Sept and it will be the boost that i need  |
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