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if we're not allowed to have a contest, it would be fun just to have sued interaction between the community | |||
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On his way out the door he grabs her by the hand and pulls her toward the bike like he's afraid she'll change her mind. He climbs on the bike and extends his hand again to help her climb on also. With the micro mini skirt she has on she is sure to give him quite a show! Jean grabs his hand and puts her other hand on his shoulder to steady herself as she climbs on the bike. Once she's seated Victor starts the bike and Jean can feel the vibration of the engine. This is going to be an interesting ride for sure! He tells her to "Hold on tight" so Jean grabs onto his waist. As he starts to pull out of the driveway the vibration starts working on her clit through the seat of the bike and she can feel it spread all the way through her whole body. When he gets out on the road he guns the engine which shoves his back into her crotch. Now she can feel the vibration through him as well as from the bike. It's getting her more worked up and she's enjoying every minute of it. Jean notices he's purposely not shifting gears so the rpm's will rev the engine harder to cause more vibration. Jean grins and decides that two can play that game and reaches down to rub his cock through the front of his pants and immediately feels him start to get hard. As she feels his excitement growing she feels her own doing the same. It doesn't take long for him to start looking for a place to go. Jean can feel the intensity growing even more so she rubs his cock even harder and faster as he tries to keep the bike on the road. He decides to go toward the city limits and finds a secluded area where there is an open field. He doesn't even hesitate and drives the bike right off the road into the field as far from any onlookers as possible. | |||
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"that's a hot story. I will post one of my own very soon. but that was so hot I love the promise and her feelings between the legs of a motorcycle" The actual chapter that it's from is about 9 pages. So there was the whole setup to that point and about a 5 page completion of the chapter. | |||
"Just remember to change the names to protect the guilty. "Done and done   | |||
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"True story; last night I had just gotten home from a date with a couple I had recently met. I started to relive the days events as I quickly undressed. I turn on the shower and walk to get a glass of wine in the kitchen and realize that I am rock hard. I walk back to the shower, with a glass of wine and one hand, in my erection in the other. I was invited over to a barbecue by some friends I just met from this site. we had already had a couple meets but nothing of the adult nature. I arrived on time and was greeted at the door by a very beautiful, naked female half of the couple. after I walked in and she closed the door her equally good husband walked up beside her. my cock getting full attention from there eyes as I undressed. They asked me to come out to the sundeck with them as the Misses held my hand and guided me out. This couple was hot, telling me that they were both bi and like the company of by men. at this point in time we have not talked about sexual preference, we had already clicked on a different level and we all three knew this was going to happen. By this time we are both hard, and she put condoms on both of us. straddling her husbands cock and looking over her shoulder. she tells me she wants a double vaginal penetration and start reading her husband as a way to tease me. it was somewhat difficult to slide up and beside her husband but the feeling was wonderful. she started coming soon after I was comfortably seated and with a good matching rhythm with her husband. we all came together again shortly after that" | |||
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"Writing erotic screenplays is a challenge, though I'm trying. Needs to be visual, but a thin line between erotic and porn. Words are more appealing in the readers mind than through a viewers ear." True on the thin line. For erotic for viewers think of a single x movie not a xxx movie. There are a few of them out there, and the Playboy channel used to show a lot of them. | |||
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"She was so excited on the drive down .. Although the content of the conversation was serious , she knew where they were going , his office , everyone else was gone and all she could visualise was his desk ...... Mmmmm happy memories , ok so maybe this was going to be the last time they saw each other but she was going to make the most of it . They still couldn't agree on how this relationship was going to go forward but she knew she lusted after his touch , despite their deifferent views , she wanted his body . His kiss seemed to melt her from the inside out . When they got to the office , she tried to play it cool but two minutes of his touch , his kisses and caresses had her so turned on , she just knew she had no control over this situation , he bent over the desk and pulled her skirt up , at the sane time managing to get her knickers down , slapping her ass as he teased her pussy lips , , pulling her hair and kissing her neck , getting her to new dizzy heights of arousal . ... Why had he this power over her ? [/ quote]Wow, that did it for me. I had to abuse myself while reading that. very hot. I think you fine lady. I yield to your finer touch  " | |||
"True story; last night I had just gotten home from a date with a couple I had recently met. I started to relive the days events as I quickly undressed. I turn on the shower and walk to get a glass of wine in the kitchen and realize that I am rock hard. I walk back to the shower, with a glass of wine and one hand, in my erection in the other. I was invited over to a barbecue by some friends I just met from this site. we had already had a couple meets but nothing of the adult nature. I arrived on time and was greeted at the door by a very beautiful, naked female half of the couple. after I walked in and she closed the door her equally good husband walked up beside her. my cock getting full attention from there eyes as I undressed. They asked me to come out to the sundeck with them as the Misses held my hand and guided me out. This couple was hot, telling me that they were both bi and like the company of by men. at this point in time we have not talked about sexual preference, we had already clicked on a different level and we all three knew this was going to happen. By this time we are both hard, and she put condoms on both of us. straddling her husbands cock and looking over her shoulder. she tells me she wants a double vaginal penetration and start reading her husband as a way to tease me. it was somewhat difficult to slide up and beside her husband but the feeling was wonderful. she started coming soon after I was comfortably seated and with a good matching rhythm with her husband. we all came together again shortly after that" | |||
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"JLove I feel a dream of you and me coming on. thank you sweetie ";-) well I hope I get to hear about it and what I did to cause it lol | |||
"She was so excited on the drive down .. Although the content of the conversation was serious , she knew where they were going , his office , everyone else was gone and all she could visualise was his desk ...... Mmmmm happy memories , ok so maybe this was going to be the last time they saw each other but she was going to make the most of it . They still couldn't agree on how this relationship was going to go forward but she knew she lusted after his touch , despite their deifferent views , she wanted his body . His kiss seemed to melt her from the inside out . When they got to the office , she tried to play it cool but two minutes of his touch , his kisses and caresses had her so turned on , she just knew she had no control over this situation , he bent over the desk and pulled her skirt up , at the sane time managing to get her knickers down , slapping her ass as he teased her pussy lips , , pulling her hair and kissing her neck , getting her to new dizzy heights of arousal .... Why had he this power over her ? " | |||
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"Always on my mind Right now I'm laying on my bed, thinking about your voice and your cock. I've closed my eyes and licked my lips just like you taught me to do and I relax and focus as I play with my nipples making them hard. So very hard they are straining through my bra, so I'm going to take it off soon! I can feel my pussy throb with anticipation of being touched, but it's much to soon to play with my pussy! I need to be patient, relax, focus on the sensations my body is having. It feels like someone is caressing my skin with their lips, with their tongue, I imagine its you. I spread my legs open and run my hands up and down my thighs, god I'm so close to my pussy I can barely take it! Writhing on the bed, moving my hands back up to my breast! They feel so big as I pinch my nipples harder and feel the wetness almost gush out of me. I can't take it, but I still don't want to touch my pussy with my hands yet. I'll use my hands for write before I cum. I reach over and pick up my vibrator and let it slide up and down my pussy, imagining its your cock, teasing me before you enter me. Mmmm my pussy is so wet, it's throbbing, God I feel the orgasm building but I stop moving, I want to make this last a bit, so I take my long vibrator and I lick my juices off of it. I moan damn I taste so good, I shove the vibrator in my mouth thinking about your hard cock! I make myself gag on it imagining you telling me job well done. I take the vibrator out of my mouth and push it inside of my pussy! Fuck! as soon as it hits my gspot I gasp and cum hard, but I'm not done yet, that was far to fast , I didn't even get a chance to fuck my pussy with it! In and out I use it, my pussy is so tight but my toy feels so good! Faster and faster one hand fucking my pussy the other hand on my nipples pulling and pinching. This is going to be the perfect "O", I put down my toy and I start to rub my clit with my fingers my ass lifts up off the bed it feels so damn good, my eyes are shut tight so I can picture you worshipping my pussy. I draw circles around my clit with my fingers, my clit is so hard, it's building I feel it start and I don't stop fingering my clit until I cum screaming I open my eyes I see stars, my body shakes as I slowly come down from the earth shattering orgasm I've just had. All because I couldn't get you off my mind." This forum thread is starting to get pretty steamy. | |||
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"Yes, I do believe you right and it is getting very steamy. Its turning out to be quite a thread. Do you think we should continue? "Why not. | |||
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"This thread is getting me all kinds of worked up " | |||
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"With the popularity of Super Hero movies. If you had super powers, would you use them for sex? Story coming soon. "In a word.... YES | |||
"With the popularity of Super Hero movies. If you had super powers, would you use them for sex? Story coming soon.
In a word.... YES "And what super powers would you want? For us it would be pheromones ( To make people even hornier.) and telekinesis to stimulate things people didn't even know they had. | |||
"With the popularity of Super Hero movies. If you had super powers, would you use them for sex? Story coming soon.
In a word.... YES
And what super powers would you want?
For us it would be pheromones ( To make people even hornier.) and telekinesis to stimulate things people didn't even know they had. "How can I even top that! Those are perfect the power to freeze time would come in handy. | |||
"With the popularity of Super Hero movies. If you had super powers, would you use them for sex? Story coming soon.
In a word.... YES
And what super powers would you want?
For us it would be pheromones ( To make people even hornier.) and telekinesis to stimulate things people didn't even know they had.
How can I even top that! Those are perfect the power to freeze time would come in handy."That could be fun also, just think of all the interesting things you could do with that. Or shape shifting.( you could be anyone.) | |||
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"One last look in the mirror before getting dressed, my breasts perfectly positioned in the new bra i had chosen, my panties clutching my smoothness, holdups showing my shapely legs perfectly, i felt sexy and ready. Sat in my car, i considered my decision again, "what was i doing, am i ready for this, am i anxious,excited , scared?" Before i knew it, i was there. anticipation building inside me. I was aroused already, the thought of him in my mind, the want for him pulsating through my body, teasing me, tasting me, making me his. i approach the front door, my knees weak from adrenilin, my throat dry from arousal. he opens it before i knock, i can not see him, but i know he is there. i have waited for this for so long, and i am struggling to contain my want and need, my breathing is heavy, my body sensitive and ready for touch. i walk inside and he is there stood before me. this is it, this is the moment i have been longing for...................... honest opinions? Xx "It's good!! More?? | |||
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"I feel his eyes upon me, engulfing the sight before him, caressing my body with his stare. i feel vunerable, like a naughty child awaiting her punishment, the fear of rejection, wanting to please. he walks towards me, his stare still upon me, he takes my hand and pulls me close. i feel his lips upon mine, all fear disappears, i let go, i feel alive, electric. his tongue meets mine, he tastes so good, and i want more, i want his hands upon me, his tongue tasting me, his naked body against mine. i whisper in his ear "take me, i am yours, command me, i will obey" he smiles and leads me to the bedroom............ "I'm enjoying the build up! | |||
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"I stay silent, hands firmly on the wall, my body heavy, needing to move, unable to see. Is he watching me? I know he is there, i sense his movement around the room. I feel him beside me, "open your legs" he commands. i open my legs to reveal my wetness, my bottom raised, my head tilted back. then i feel it. Its cold and hard between my cheeks, an unfamiliar feeling. its coldness exciting me and curiousity stimulating me. He places it carefully and then it begins. He moves it back and forth, teasing my clit with the tip. It feels so good, how can this be a punishment? "Oh yes, oh yes" and then he stops, i am confused. "Please don't stop, please dont" "You can not cum, you will not cum until you learn to obey" I am beyond control, now i understand, "sorry sir, i will do as i am told" ............" I've gone 2 weeks with being punished, it's was so many emotions!! I was crazed with arousal, begging to cum, I was angry, disappointed in myself for talking back the list goes on! In the end the reward was far greater! Not that I could ever have a Sir again, but I do miss my Sir like crazy
Enjoying the story!!! | |||
"I stay silent, hands firmly on the wall, my body heavy, needing to move, unable to see. Is he watching me? I know he is there, i sense his movement around the room. I feel him beside me, "open your legs" he commands. i open my legs to reveal my wetness, my bottom raised, my head tilted back. then i feel it. Its cold and hard between my cheeks, an unfamiliar feeling. its coldness exciting me and curiousity stimulating me. He places it carefully and then it begins. He moves it back and forth, teasing my clit with the tip. It feels so good, how can this be a punishment? "Oh yes, oh yes" and then he stops, i am confused. "Please don't stop, please dont" "You can not cum, you will not cum until you learn to obey" I am beyond control, now i understand, "sorry sir, i will do as i am told" ............ I've gone 2 weeks with being punished, it's was so many emotions!! I was crazed with arousal, begging to cum, I was angry, disappointed in myself for talking back the list goes on! In the end the reward was far greater! Not that I could ever have a Sir again, but I do miss my Sir like crazy
Enjoying the story!!! "aww thank you for sharing that with me. i miss my sir too. | |||
"I stay silent, hands firmly on the wall, my body heavy, needing to move, unable to see. Is he watching me? I know he is there, i sense his movement around the room. I feel him beside me, "open your legs" he commands. i open my legs to reveal my wetness, my bottom raised, my head tilted back. then i feel it. Its cold and hard between my cheeks, an unfamiliar feeling. its coldness exciting me and curiousity stimulating me. He places it carefully and then it begins. He moves it back and forth, teasing my clit with the tip. It feels so good, how can this be a punishment? "Oh yes, oh yes" and then he stops, i am confused. "Please don't stop, please dont" "You can not cum, you will not cum until you learn to obey" I am beyond control, now i understand, "sorry sir, i will do as i am told" ............ I've gone 2 weeks with being punished, it's was so many emotions!! I was crazed with arousal, begging to cum, I was angry, disappointed in myself for talking back the list goes on! In the end the reward was far greater! Not that I could ever have a Sir again, but I do miss my Sir like crazy
Enjoying the story!!!
aww thank you for sharing that with me. i miss my sir too. "Of course! your story has definitely stirred up some good memories looks like it's made me want to write a little about my time with Sir, we'll see if I can do it! Changing many parts of course
Hope you keep sharing yours | |||
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"One last look in the mirror before getting dressed, my breasts perfectly positioned in the new bra i had chosen, my panties clutching my smoothness, holdups showing my shapely legs perfectly, i felt sexy and ready. Sat in my car, i considered my decision again, "what was i doing, am i ready for this, am i anxious,excited , scared?" Before i knew it, i was there. anticipation building inside me. I was aroused already, the thought of him in my mind, the want for him pulsating through my body, teasing me, tasting me, making me his. i approach the front door, my knees weak from adrenilin, my throat dry from arousal. he opens it before i knock, i can not see him, but i know he is there. i have waited for this for so long, and i am struggling to contain my want and need, my breathing is heavy, my body sensitive and ready for touch. i walk inside and he is there stood before me. this is it, this is the moment i have been longing for...................... honest opinions? Xx "I love it, totaly obscure physical sexual gender concerning who is conveying the story. Being bi myself I find that this allows my imagination to roam in all kinds of directions. Literarily speaking I find it genious to be able arouse many different types of people without ever implicating or dedicating the story in any one direction or preference. It could still end up being anyone in any number of situations. Also being attracted to kinkier and more taboo or fetish interactions sexually my arousel and curiosity were seemingly one in the same. I wanted to hear whatever may come next. I loved it and think you have great talent not to mention I'm intrigued with what your sexual preferences, curiosities and fantasies may be. And know that if any of our interests happened to be similar that speaking with you or reading your future work would be an intense turn on most definitely. Thanks and keep up the good work. | |||
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