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By *ravisty91 OP   Man  over a year ago

fishponds

I wanna know what people think. Not in a mean spirited way, just a brutally honest way. This is how I learn.

*prepares first aid for a battered ego*

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I’d say it’s a good profile, maybe just a little too lengthy on the writing! Sure you could make it a little more succinct for ease of access!

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By *inky-MinxWoman  over a year ago

Grantham

Too much text for me and too many cock shots.

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By *isaB45Woman  over a year ago

Fabville


"Too much text for me and too many cock shots."

Shall I do my thing?

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By *inky-MinxWoman  over a year ago

Grantham


"Too much text for me and too many cock shots.

Shall I do my thing? "

Will he cope?

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By *ravisty91 OP   Man  over a year ago

fishponds

Oh god what is “your thing”? But thanks for the feedback you guys I’ll try shortening it and take away the penis photos!

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By *d4fun73Man  over a year ago

Shipley

Hi all can you take a look at my profile and tell me if its OK or what might be wrong with it... Thanks in advance..

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By *isaB45Woman  over a year ago

Fabville


"Too much text for me and too many cock shots.

Shall I do my thing?

Will he cope?"

I don't know..

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By *inky-MinxWoman  over a year ago

Grantham


"Too much text for me and too many cock shots.

Shall I do my thing?

Will he cope?

I don't know.."

Go easy on him then

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By *isaB45Woman  over a year ago

Fabville


"Too much text for me and too many cock shots.

Shall I do my thing?

Will he cope?

I don't know..

Go easy on him then"

I'd best ask him..he looks too nice!

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By *isaB45Woman  over a year ago

Fabville


"I wanna know what people think. Not in a mean spirited way, just a brutally honest way. This is how I learn.

*prepares first aid for a battered ego*"

OP...I am rather good at critiquing a profile, in a brutally honest way.

I would be happy to do you, either here or via pm, especialy if I get to see an arse pic of yours...

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By *oodguyeddieMan  over a year ago

l36

I'd be intrigued by what other's think of mine

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By *ravisty91 OP   Man  over a year ago

fishponds

Do your worst Lisa

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By *inky-MinxWoman  over a year ago

Grantham


"I wanna know what people think. Not in a mean spirited way, just a brutally honest way. This is how I learn.

*prepares first aid for a battered ego*

OP...I am rather good at critiquing a profile, in a brutally honest way.

I would be happy to do you, either here or via pm, especialy if I get to see an arse pic of yours... "

Can I help too

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By *isaB45Woman  over a year ago

Fabville


"I wanna know what people think. Not in a mean spirited way, just a brutally honest way. This is how I learn.

*prepares first aid for a battered ego*

OP...I am rather good at critiquing a profile, in a brutally honest way.

I would be happy to do you, either here or via pm, especialy if I get to see an arse pic of yours...

Can I help too "

Of course you can, my lovely

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By *isaB45Woman  over a year ago

Fabville

Well, here goes...

Your username is ok.

The strapline about ladies first is patronising and cringeworthy.

Your avatar is great..a nice smiling face.

The rest of your pics are shit. No-one likes to see someone else hanging off of your dick. Least of all potential playmates. Save them for your wankbank. The others are dull. Think about the background, as much as the focus of your picture. And don't frown. You have a lovely smile! Pics where you are behind your phone are awful.

Get creative. Consider black & white. And remember less is more.

Your write-up is interesting, descriptive, insightful, if a little long-winded. At least you have used grammar & punctuation, and broken it down into little chunks.

All in all, I give your profile 7/10. Be pleased with that..I've been harsher..

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By *inky-MinxWoman  over a year ago

Grantham


"Well, here goes...

Your username is ok.

The strapline about ladies first is patronising and cringeworthy.

Your avatar is great..a nice smiling face.

The rest of your pics are shit. No-one likes to see someone else hanging off of your dick. Least of all potential playmates. Save them for your wankbank. The others are dull. Think about the background, as much as the focus of your picture. And don't frown. You have a lovely smile! Pics where you are behind your phone are awful.

Get creative. Consider black & white. And remember less is more.

Your write-up is interesting, descriptive, insightful, if a little long-winded. At least you have used grammar & punctuation, and broken it down into little chunks.

All in all, I give your profile 7/10. Be pleased with that..I've been harsher.."

Did you get the bum shot?

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By *isaB45Woman  over a year ago

Fabville


"Well, here goes...

Your username is ok.

The strapline about ladies first is patronising and cringeworthy.

Your avatar is great..a nice smiling face.

The rest of your pics are shit. No-one likes to see someone else hanging off of your dick. Least of all potential playmates. Save them for your wankbank. The others are dull. Think about the background, as much as the focus of your picture. And don't frown. You have a lovely smile! Pics where you are behind your phone are awful.

Get creative. Consider black & white. And remember less is more.

Your write-up is interesting, descriptive, insightful, if a little long-winded. At least you have used grammar & punctuation, and broken it down into little chunks.

All in all, I give your profile 7/10. Be pleased with that..I've been harsher..

Did you get the bum shot?"

No

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By *inky-MinxWoman  over a year ago

Grantham


"Did you get the bum shot?

No "

Crap profile then.

I've tried to read more of the text but got bored at Perth.

I skim read the rest and thought I'd not want o meet this guy, he's into stuff with women that I find disrespectful

However, the women who like that could love it

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By *ravisty91 OP   Man  over a year ago

fishponds

Thanks! Very detailed! Dw youll get your ass photo when I get home

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