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I thought it was quite good till I got to the dislikes bit, it comes across as a bit...I don't know...but possibly not as jokey as you were going for - especially the bit about "not nicking your mrs." |
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"I thought it was quite good till I got to the dislikes bit, it comes across as a bit...I don't know...but possibly not as jokey as you were going for - especially the bit about "not nicking your mrs.""
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"I thought it was quite good till I got to the dislikes bit, it comes across as a bit...I don't know...but possibly not as jokey as you were going for - especially the bit about "not nicking your mrs.""
Although I'm a single guy, I had to agree with this post as I read it in a similar way. You may want to check on the typo's too if I'm being pedantic |
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