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Does our profile come across as..
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Arrogant or truthful?
Just trying to be clear what we like / don't like!"
I imagine that those who find it arrogant will be those who feel it excludes them. It's clear what you're looking for...maybe the first line is a little confrontative but we usually find people end up there due to the idiots, hard of reading or little head messages... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Arrogant or truthful?
Just trying to be clear what we like / don't like!"
Not arrogant, a little, demanding, but then I think ours is too.
Did you run out of steam on the last paragraph? I get the idea, but it doesn't read as finished. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Comes across as quite passive aggressive. The first line is like your introduction to new people so imagine you were in an interview and you started your pitch (after all you’re selling yourselves on fab) with that line. |
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By *good-being-badMan
over a year ago
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"Arrogant or truthful?
Just trying to be clear what we like / don't like!"
I say the same to all genders and demographics..
Your profile is there to inform the reader of your wants and desires give folk a sense of your personality and ehopefully entice folk through the pictures and words with similar interests..
Personally .
I don't find it arrogant I just don't find it enticing or personable.. you say you're fun, you're looking for fun I get no sense you are fun..
truthful ..maybe..you tell folk what you're looking for nothing about what you bring to a meet.
If it's working do nothing, if it's not change something. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You've been on here over a year.
You should know by now that it doesn't really matter what you put on your profile - some people can't read 
If the people you want aren't attracted to your profile then it's better to do the searching yourselves x
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By *p4funCouple
over a year ago
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As with ours it tends to reflect what we have experienced on fab, we all have preferences we try to keep it light hearted but as another pointed out very few actually read profiles anyway lol |
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"As with ours it tends to reflect what we have experienced on fab, we all have preferences we try to keep it light hearted but as another pointed out very few actually read profiles anyway lol "
Yes, ours reflects our experience on fab. As you say very few read it anyway |
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"Arrogant or truthful?
Just trying to be clear what we like / don't like!"
I found it direct and to the point but not at all arrogant, so thumbs up there  . I'm not in the set of people you're looking for but I didn't feel at all snubbed or put down so also good.
Quibbles would be that your title text has been cut short by fab so that you would appear to be looking for a fit, genuine and honest "a"  and that the primary thing you seem to be looking for is fun (capitalised in both title and text) but, by being entirely direct, you don't have much of a sense of fun in your profile. If you want to attract fun people, it might be beneficial to come across as fun yourselves. Of course you'd then also get more approaches from people you don't wish to meet so I'll leave the balance between fun and firmness to you.
I hope that was useful. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It was fine but a bit lifeless and lacking in personality. You need to tell people more about yourselves and how you feel about each other and what you like and dislike. It looks a little like a collection of bullet points right now so take a look at some other couples profiles for inspiration and work on yours. Also the most eye catching thing on your profile is the age difference which would intrigue most people I know on here. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Arrogant or truthful?
Just trying to be clear what we like / don't like!
No I think it’s to the point saying wot u want and don’t want.But I bet u still get loads of pointless messages xx"
Agree, most of the time it doesn’t matter what text is in your profile  |
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