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over a year ago
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"The photos are good but the text I would break up into paragraphs and make sure all those capital letters and spellings are right and then you’ll be on fire.
Eye candy for the ladies, mate " Nice one,thanks for the advice
I will work on that  |
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"Is my profile SHIT??"
No.
.But you might want to put a space after all of the punctuation. I’d also ask if you really need the two ‘lol’s.
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Personal thing, but I always have a little alarm bell when someone says they’re clean. It’s like when a product has ‘quality’ in the name. But, that’s probably just me. I’m not a woman, maybe they like that to be clarified. |
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