OP I like your profile text, it shows some personality.
It has obviously worked well for you because you have plenty of verification.
The only thing I would change is most of your photos. The mean and moody look might be something you like but it just makes you look like a grumpy bugger!
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Will. You asked for advice on your profile text.
At first I was going to say you should look at mine.
But reading the other replies to your post, I was surprised that the respondents have rated it not on the content, but on it's results.
I think the important thing is that a profile says a little about the personality of the personal it represents. It seems others just want confirmation that it will get you the occasional shag.
Anyroad, it seems good enough to me. You look like a decent chap
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"Will. You asked for advice on your profile text.
At first I was going to say you should look at mine.
But reading the other replies to your post, I was surprised that the respondents have rated it not on the content, but on it's results.
I think the important thing is that a profile says a little about the personality of the personal it represents. It seems others just want confirmation that it will get you the occasional shag.
Anyroad, it seems good enough to me. You look like a decent chap
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Isn't someone's profile really a means to an end rather than an general biography though? |
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"Will. You asked for advice on your profile text.
At first I was going to say you should look at mine.
But reading the other replies to your post, I was surprised that the respondents have rated it not on the content, but on it's results.
I think the important thing is that a profile says a little about the personality of the personal it represents. It seems others just want confirmation that it will get you the occasional shag.
Anyroad, it seems good enough to me. You look like a decent chap
Isn't someone's profile really a means to an end rather than an general biography though?"
Your long profile has no 'biographical' information, and despite having no information about anything apart from what you like sexually, based on the number of meets is 3 times better than Will's and several times better than mine.
Unquestionably as a 'means to an end' you are winning. |
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Isn't someone's profile really a means to an end rather than an general biography though?
Your long profile has no 'biographical' information, and despite having no information about anything apart from what you like sexually, based on the number of meets is 3 times better than Will's and several times better than mine.
Unquestionably as a 'means to an end' you are winning. "
Well it is a swingers site...  |
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Thanks all for the responses, based on what you have all said I think I will edit a little of what's already there and add some more personality to it. It probably won't hurt to add some more recent photos too.  |
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