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critique my profile please
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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as title ,
is anyone willing to give my profile a read and point out any faults ypu see with it ,
im a long standing verified genuine member whos been lucky enough to meet some great people
just feel my profiles slipped into the " seen it before pile ??"
ladies - any input ?
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Might be worth sticking it through a spelling and grammar check - there's one or two spelling mistakes in there and you don't need a space before a comma! 
I know spelling etc shouldn't be a consideration but to *some* it is so why disenfranchise those?
A few more pics (torso etc) tends to be appreciated by the ladies so I understand.
Good luck fella  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Good profile. But two cock shots only, does not show variety, so perhaps add some more pics. As for the code thing, never got why some do that  . I'm not going to pop a code on a message, to prove I've read a profile haha. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Text pretty decent. Take the advice above.
Pics.....? Really....? Just two cock shots....you must have more to offer than that"
ive more pictures but there saved to private , guess i need to open a few more
i genrally say in any contact message " pictures on request " |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Text pretty decent. Take the advice above.
Pics.....? Really....? Just two cock shots....you must have more to offer than that
ive more pictures but there saved to private , guess i need to open a few more
i genrally say in any contact message " pictures on request ""
A lot of women check out a profile before even opening a message. I know I do. If I saw those two pictures.. And read the code request ( obviously I can't speak for everyone) I wouldn't open the message I'm afraid |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Text pretty decent. Take the advice above.
Pics.....? Really....? Just two cock shots....you must have more to offer than that
ive more pictures but there saved to private , guess i need to open a few more
i genrally say in any contact message " pictures on request ""
Women won't feel the need to request photos from quite a closed off profile when there's plenty of eligible single men with lots of photos on show. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"surely if they have liked what the profile says the inquisitive will ask for a picture ?
that was my thoughts "
But wouldn't a good profile text and well thought out photos increase your chances more? If your current method isn't working. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"surely if they have liked what the profile says the inquisitive will ask for a picture ?
that was my thoughts "
There are many of those around, with a veriety of pictures too. The best of both. Some women are more likely to gravitate towards those profiles. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"surely if they have liked what the profile says the inquisitive will ask for a picture ?
that was my thoughts
There are many of those around, with a veriety of pictures too. The best of both. Some women are more likely to gravitate towards those profiles. "
Variety* |
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OP when i get a message the first thing i do is look at the profile.
I look at the pictures first then read the text.
Your text seems ok, nothing too off putting in there but nothing really catches the imagination and piques my interest either.
Your pics are quite honestly, shite! You have a cock, congratulations, so does every other man on here. Once you have seen one cock pic you've seen 'em all. You are much more than just a cock. Show us some more pics. It doesn't have to be a face pic, keep that private to send in a message. Guys seem much more sexy to me when they leave something to the imagination. Some of the sexiest pictures i've seen on here are men who are clothed/partially clothed. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Might be worth sticking it through a spelling and grammar check - there's one or two spelling mistakes in there and you don't need a space before a comma!
I know spelling etc shouldn't be a consideration but to *some* it is so why disenfranchise those?
A few more pics (torso etc) tends to be appreciated by the ladies so I understand.
Good luck fella "
This is good advice. Personally, when I look at a profile, I'm looking for what the text and photos tell me about that person for an initial indication of whether or not I'll be interested. Bad grammar/spelling isn't the end of the world, but if it's obvious that someone couldn't be bothered to write more than a couple of lines or use capital letters, full stops etc, then they're probably not going to be the sort of person who'll put much effort into seducing me.
Also, cock shots are a real turn off for me (and a lot of women I suspect), I'd rather see a sexy body/bum shot which gives the suggestion of more, than an 'in your face, this is my cock' photo. The size/shape of a guy's cock is never the first thing I want to know about him. Try and make photos a bit arty/tasteful too...definitely no socks left on, or toilet seats in the background if you get my drift. 
Rather than dissing other users 'Prefer verified people as of late theres a huge increase in bullshitters and timewasters', which comes across as quite negative, how about saying something like 'I prefer verified people so I know you're genuine'.
I hope some of that is helpful, it's all meant in a constructive way.
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By (user no longer on site)
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I've found that the best profile narratives start with... "If you recognise my face it's because my picture was in the paper after I won the Euro Millions"....
Anything you say after that doesn't matter....  |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"as title ,
is anyone willing to give my profile a read and point out any faults ypu see with it ,
im a long standing verified genuine member whos been lucky enough to meet some great people
just feel my profiles slipped into the " seen it before pile ??"
ladies - any input ?
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I am afraid that I could not get past the terrible grammar and bad spelling, let alone the cock pictures. Probably just me, thought. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"This is a great idea! I would also love constructive criticism
It's hard as I want to describe myself but not give to much away"
You succeeded in not giving anything away! All the text tells others about yourself, that the info in the rest of your profile doesn't say already, is that you're discrete. Also, you've only got one photo set as public, and that's of you playing tents in your boxers. I don't know about anyone else, but there's not nearly enough there to make me take a second look, which is a shame because you look like a nice guy from what I can tell from your tiny profile photo, which bizarrely doesn't show in your public photos. 
Again, all of the above is meant in a positive way, I hope it helps.
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By (user no longer on site)
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"This is a great idea! I would also love constructive criticism
It's hard as I want to describe myself but not give to much away
You succeeded in not giving anything away! All the text tells others about yourself, that the info in the rest of your profile doesn't say already, is that you're discrete. Also, you've only got one photo set as public, and that's of you playing tents in your boxers. I don't know about anyone else, but there's not nearly enough there to make me take a second look, which is a shame because you look like a nice guy from what I can tell from your tiny profile photo, which bizarrely doesn't show in your public photos.
Again, all of the above is meant in a positive way, I hope it helps.
V x "
Thanks I will try and add to it I think! |
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