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By *iewMan
over a year ago
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rather than a scattergun approach with feedback, why not contact the people who have met you and ask them what attracted them to you....
to work with specifics is often more fruitful.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Yep,
Your description is a bit cheesy. "I like slap and tickle" is straight out of a Carry on Film.
Loose the first picture in the hat, makes you look old, and the other one in the hat makes you a bit odd.
But just my opinion, you have seven revues so maybe you should stick as you are. |
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By *abphil OP Man
over a year ago
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"Yep,
Your description is a bit cheesy. "I like slap and tickle" is straight out of a Carry on Film.
Loose the first picture in the hat, makes you look old, and the other one in the hat makes you a bit odd.
But just my opinion, you have seven revues so maybe you should stick as you are."
Thanks sorted  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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We have just been looking for a single man to replace one who has found found love in their life. It has been a very difficult experience because the profiles locally are so bland. Perhaps one in twenty stands out.
We have found what catches our eyes in particular is a reasonably detailed profile, perhaps 10-20 lines but laid out nicely in paragraphs for pleasant reading. One that gives some hint of what might be to come as well as some idea of the personality behind the profile.
Your profile offers nothing to separate yourself out from all the rest of the profiles on here. It says nothing about you that isn't said on other profiles.
"fun and friendly guy", "Hold a conversation", "respect the limits" and "wicked tongue and love foreplay" are all stock phrases that we have seen before.
The guy we are now talking to, he said something a little different on his profile. It made us smile, it said to us he was interesting and it was what we are looking for.
We wish you the best of luck xx |
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By *abphil OP Man
over a year ago
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"We have just been looking for a single man to replace one who has found found love in their life. It has been a very difficult experience because the profiles locally are so bland. Perhaps one in twenty stands out.
We have found what catches our eyes in particular is a reasonably detailed profile, perhaps 10-20 lines but laid out nicely in paragraphs for pleasant reading. One that gives some hint of what might be to come as well as some idea of the personality behind the profile.
Your profile offers nothing to separate yourself out from all the rest of the profiles on here. It says nothing about you that isn't said on other profiles.
"fun and friendly guy", "Hold a conversation", "respect the limits" and "wicked tongue and love foreplay" are all stock phrases that we have seen before.
The guy we are now talking to, he said something a little different on his profile. It made us smile, it said to us he was interesting and it was what we are looking for.
We wish you the best of luck xx"
Boring old Phil must try harder. Just don't want to bore peeps to death |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Boring old Phil must try harder. Just don't want to bore peeps to death "
Well you did ask. We love reading long profiles, if they are written well. Anyone can write 10-20 lines of interesting material about themselves, if they are able to look at themselves; who they are and what they can offer both physically and mentally. We appreciate ours is particularly long but that's more to keep those we are not looking for informed of this. |
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