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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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If you think it's the best you can make it, leave it.
I'd suggest......read it from a woman's perspective and ask yourself 'would I meet me?' based on what you've read. |
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I'm not seeing the crude and vulgar aspect myself .
He's saying straight out what he wants in a manner that many people use in forum posts and messages. If this was a site for basket weaving I would say it was inappropriate but on a site where we are all looking for the thing that does it for us, I can't see a problem. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You've been on 4 weeks and are verified and say you've got contacts?? Why you worrying some guys on here months before they get a meet!!
I'd put some public photos if I were you, also I know for a fact Vera wouldn't meet anyone with a piercing and sure she's not alone so that may cut down the amount of responses you get
That's it |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi can i ask help look and my profile and let me know good and bad points plz " Did nothing for us. Came across as a little ignorant actually (sorry, just calling it as we see it.)
Also, punctuation is your friend. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I too thought it was crude and badly written and I would block straight away if I received that message. But as someone pointed out if it attracts the type of women u are after, fair play to you.
Oh one more thing, gentle giant at 5'8" … does that mean to are a very large man? I'd read it like that which isn't my type but some women like big guys. |
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"If you think it's the best you can make it, leave it.
I'd suggest......read it from a woman's perspective and ask yourself 'would I meet me?' based on what you've read.
Done a new one ?
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Read it out loud. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I'm a bit out of breath reading it. It could do with some punctuation. It comes across better than the old one to me. However if I was a woman it wouldn't entice me |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"If you think it's the best you can make it, leave it.
I'd suggest......read it from a woman's perspective and ask yourself 'would I meet me?' based on what you've read.
Done a new one ?
" I think it's an improvement on what you had previously.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I've just had a look, and I have one word - Suspicious.
Let me explain why.
You have been here for only 4 weeks but you have two verifications, the latest of which was posted 3 weeks ago - but you're displaying neither of them.
Why?
Did you use your couples profile to verify this one?
As for the rest of it. No profiles and very little about you or what you can offer a potential meet. Hardly standing out from the thousands of other single guys on here.
This approach may have been OK when you were here as a couple, but, if you've been on fab previously for any length of time, you'll know that single guys have a much tougher time. |
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