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Constructive criticism for the profile above you 4
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Go on give advice to the poster above you to see how they could improve their profile and chances on this wonderful site.
I would say it is not for the faint hearted but everyone was lovely on the first thread. However a gentle reminder on thread two was needed for criticism to remain constructive, and Mod input in three, so let's keep it light hearted and yet purposeful.
Do quote posts or posters names that you are critiquing because it can get confusing when the thread moves fast  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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koda_29 you finished the last thread.
Wow it's impressive: the structure, grammar, well everything including being informative. Yours should be the prototype profile for those who want to know how to write a decent profile.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"koda_29 you finished the last thread.
Wow it's impressive: the structure, grammar, well everything including being informative. Yours should be the prototype profile for those who want to know how to write a decent profile. "
Love it, witty well written, punctuated and informing.
It is long and what does sapiosexual mean? |
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By *opinovMan
over a year ago
Point Nemo, Cumbria |
@ Cupcake
A few minor errors of grammar and punctuation but nothing too serious. Some might read the odd bit here and there as being slightly patronizing, though I'm sure there are sufficient idiots around to justify it.
On the whole, though, pretty clear and inviting - I'm sure my profile isn't as good, judging by my success rate here.
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By *opinovMan
over a year ago
Point Nemo, Cumbria |
@ allfor1
Breif but humorous in a mildly self-deprecating way.
I like it.
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By *opinovMan
over a year ago
Point Nemo, Cumbria |
* Brief, rather.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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wow thats a long profile |
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By *opinovMan
over a year ago
Point Nemo, Cumbria |
"wow thats a long profile"
All the girls say that.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"wow thats a long profile
All the girls say that. "
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"koda_29 you finished the last thread.
Wow it's impressive: the structure, grammar, well everything including being informative. Yours should be the prototype profile for those who want to know how to write a decent profile.
Love it, witty well written, punctuated and informing.
It is long and what does sapiosexual mean?"
Finding intelligence sexually attractive |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Text is a little long just to find out am to short lol |
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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago
Titz Towers, North Notts |
All eyes on us - clear profile text, but a bit anodyne |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Kop , well thought out but maybe a little long, its hard to get the right balance as people will just start skimming rather than reading all the way through |
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Incase of emergencies keep a small toffee hammer to hand xxx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Incase of emergencies keep a small toffee hammer to hand xxx"
Couple profile but only female pics on show |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Incase of emergencies keep a small toffee hammer to hand xxx
Couple profile but only female pics on show "
A fun profile it's great |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"All eyes on us - clear profile text, but a bit anodyne "
Am probably going to sound really thick now but did you mean annoying ? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"All eyes on us - clear profile text, but a bit anodyne
Am probably going to sound really thick now but did you mean annoying ?"
Anodyne means a little dull and inoffensive I think, not that I'm agreeing, profile looks fine |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"All eyes on us - clear profile text, but a bit anodyne
Am probably going to sound really thick now but did you mean annoying ?
Anodyne means a little dull and inoffensive I think, not that I'm agreeing, profile looks fine"
Ahh I see fair enough
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By *rben112Man
over a year ago
worcester |
Great. Good range of pictures. Only critique from me is of you and not the profile. Both smokers. Not my thing |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Great. Good range of pictures. Only critique from me is of you and not the profile. Both smokers. Not my thing "
Having been here over a year and no verifications may be a little disconcerting. However well done for stating your attached status as some withhold that info. |
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Its long and asks for intelligent men which rules me out |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Wt u think of my profile? |
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By *rben112Man
over a year ago
worcester |
"Great. Good range of pictures. Only critique from me is of you and not the profile. Both smokers. Not my thing
Having been here over a year and no verifications may be a little disconcerting. However well done for stating your attached status as some withhold that info."
thank you. I have met on here but the couple chooses not to verify. I don't mind as its their choice....or maybe i was that bad 
as for yours. I found it straight to the point, which i do like. But also extremely entertaining read. Very witty. |
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Hmm I'm struggling to find a negative. Surprised you have not had more meets to be honest. Much better than most single guy profiles. |
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By *rben112Man
over a year ago
worcester |
"Hmm I'm struggling to find a negative. Surprised you have not had more meets to be honest. Much better than most single guy profiles. "
just had a peep. Stolen a few ideas from you. If that's alright? Good pics (until the mankini shot  ). Maybe a action shot. But in not the target tour after so probably not the best to critique. Thankyou for the feedback too |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Not much to pick at you about pal |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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says straight on profile, no good to us !!! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Too far away ! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Comebiwithus......in devon  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Comebiwithus......in devon "
Informative, good clear pics only slight critisism is the amount of detail being a bit too much. |
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Great and many photos. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"[Removed by poster at 31/03/14 19:40:28]"
I personally like some spaces in the profile text for different subject matter. Although paragraphing may not be necessary but for me, it just looks nice.
..but, apart from that. It's rather short and informative - does the job well. If only i could do that.
I just waffle.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Popeye I love your profile not many guys make me laugh that soon lol ..... great photo's too |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Excellent profile and some extremely sexy pics to. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Thank you
Your profile is great x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Why thankyou x |
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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago
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I daren't post on here, as I know mine is long....but it has to be up here  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I daren't post on here, as I know mine is long....but it has to be up here
Only problem is you're so Damn far away! "
It's a bit pirately. I think it would benefit from being more Highway Man in parts, for variety and road appeal. |
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Well all I can say is that i think the pearls would look better on me lol |
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Needs to change dress has a woman to dress AS a woman |
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Ok Ok no cock pictures x and what does professional mean |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I can't even remember what crap I wrote on mine. I know I wouldn't have used paragraphs or made everything make sense. I write what pops into my head before I forget. I have a seriously bad memory |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"7 inches seems perfect"
For me, it would be the use of capital letters and spacing after the full stops. It's little things like that, that kind of bug me.
...it's your profile so don't take any notice of what i'm saying if you don't want to. But, i'm that kind of person where 'there may be an elephant in the room but i would not see it' (obviously i would - i ain't a bloody moron lol)
Apart from that. I think it's a very articulate profile and good pictures.
Is my profile a bit too long though? And any suggestions for improvements very welcome please.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"7 inches seems perfect
For me, it would be the use of capital letters and spacing after the full stops. It's little things like that, that kind of bug me.
...it's your profile so don't take any notice of what i'm saying if you don't want to. But, i'm that kind of person where 'there may be an elephant in the room but i would not see it' (obviously i would - i ain't a bloody moron lol)
Apart from that. I think it's a very articulate profile and good pictures.
Is my profile a bit too long though? And any suggestions for improvements very welcome please.
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Very funny |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Very nice profile and lots of verifications which is very good as well as some great photos, I don't think there is anything wrong with this profile at all |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Comebiwithus......in devon
Informative, good clear pics only slight critisism is the amount of detail being a bit too much."
Well ur the first guy to say iv given too much
P.s..what details ??? I like ur honest feedback |
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By *avNlillyCouple
over a year ago
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"Very nice profile and lots of verifications which is very good as well as some great photos, I don't think there is anything wrong with this profile at all "
No public pics! We wouldn't give any profile without public pics a second glance x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Very well covered in all areas in what you look like, what you look for and what you don't want etc. Should be enough for other people to get the idea of what you're looking for! Lovely profile! X |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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@Pacman
Very detailed profile, you definitely know what's you want. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"@Pacman
Very detailed profile, you definitely know what's you want."
Might be a bit lengthy to some, but still good |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Might be a bit lengthy to some, but still good "
Verification summery hidden.
It's good to read what others think |
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??????utterly awesome xxxxxx
Marie xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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bum hole pic? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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profile too demanding... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"??????utterly awesome xxxxxx
Marie xx"
Haha,,thank you, but your not playing the game, your supposed to criticise us |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"??????utterly awesome xxxxxx
Marie xx
Haha,,thank you, but your not playing the game, your supposed to criticise us "
Dont think this can be improved x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"profile too demanding... "
My body, my rules.....Doesn't hold me back  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Sorry but I have to agree it is a bit demanding, but if it suits you and doesn't hold you back, then why worry. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"profile too demanding...
My body, my rules.....Doesn't hold me back "
glad to hear it |
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By *oonguyMan
over a year ago
Newcastle |
More details needed, that penis is putting to me to shame. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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glad to hear it"
Chains. Hi.
Would you really met a 99 year old.
X |
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Can't see your profile Sam and amber.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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glad to hear it
Chains. Hi.
Would you really met a 99 year old.
X"
id give it a go. she would probably knacker me out tho.. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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glad to hear it
Chains. Hi.
Would you really met a 99 year old.
X
id give it a go. she would probably knacker me out tho.. "
Bloody hell!!. Haha. Sorry I spelt your name wrong btw.
X |
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"We like long hair"
This is one of the best profiles on fab xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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""We like long hair"
This is one of the best profiles on fab xx "
Taoist, well written and concise. I wonder about the bit at the end, is it really needed?
Good body too fella |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Don't like pics of male bums. sorry. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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No piccies and quite brief |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Sofaking - Adding some photos would be good |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Sofaking - Adding some photos would be good "
gorgeous pics .. didnt quite get to the end of the text .. toooo long |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Sofaking - Adding some photos would be good gorgeous pics .. didnt quite get to the end of the text .. toooo long"
for juzie btw |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Domino 19th - too far away! Well from me anyway |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Has loads of veris so has obviously worked for him |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's very long stud |
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By *opinovMan
over a year ago
Point Nemo, Cumbria |
"Kop , well thought out but maybe a little long, its hard to get the right balance as people will just start skimming rather than reading all the way through "
Thanks for that. I suppose it is a bit rambling.
I'll try to précis it ... once I've figured out what I'm trying to say.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Good amount of information and nice pictures. Only thing I'd recommend is spacing some of the text out so it's easier to read. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"good profile and great pics"
A well written and verified profile, not many male pics though. |
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Starbeck... luv the profile except 1 big paragraph looks a bit daunting for us blokes LOL |
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note to myself be sober when i do it again lol x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"more public pics"
You don't live close enough to me - you'll have to relocate. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Starbeck... luv the profile except 1 big paragraph looks a bit daunting for us blokes LOL"
Oh I don't know, a big one is quite yummy! oh sorry forgot we were talking about the paragraph lol
TravellingAndy - Couple more photos would be nice and apart from verifying yourself from your own couples profile which isn't a good thing the profile looks good.
(So does the couples profile!) |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's very difficult criticizing others profiles without sounds rude or patronizing. |
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Juzie
Great pics
Text is a little long but well written (possibly a little repetitive about things but if they are important to you why not mention them again I suppose)
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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All I can say about Rumple is you are another in the wrong part of the country! Hehe |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Sigh. |
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By *ister WolfMan
over a year ago
Northants, Beds & Cambs |
"good profile and nice pics "
They're not looking for single men - does that count as constructive criticism? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Helppppp lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"good profile and nice pics
They're not looking for single men - does that count as constructive criticism? "
I don't have any criticism re your profile . I would like more than one public picture but see that as my personal preference.
I'd also like a visible meet veri but as your profile is quite new, so see this as fine.
from me for you sir. |
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By *ister WolfMan
over a year ago
Northants, Beds & Cambs |
"good profile and nice pics
They're not looking for single men - does that count as constructive criticism?
I don't have any criticism re your profile . I would like more than one public picture but see that as my personal preference.
I'd also like a visible meet veri but as your profile is quite new, so see this as fine.
from me for you sir."
Thank you. All points duly noted. I think I agree that I should have more public pictures. I'm also considering the comment about hidden veris. (I was hoping to get a wider range but ladies and couples seem to gravitate away from me currently). |
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Noir Pleasure. Very clear in what you want maybe a bit direct but I can see why it might need to be. Nice pics would love to see more but then that's the idea. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Noir Pleasure. Very clear in what you want maybe a bit direct but I can see why it might need to be. Nice pics would love to see more but then that's the idea. "
Danny,
Well written if a little long profile, great fun and sexy pics |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Just to many cock piks for me ! But like the look of that cake lol |
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short profile but tastefull pics |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Starbeck.
Concise, spells out the rules straight away.
Great pics!! |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Starbeck.
Concise, spells out the rules straight away.
Great pics!!"
This profile warrants no citicism, so from me. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Starbeck.
Concise, spells out the rules straight away.
Great pics!!
This profile warrants no citicism, so from me. "
Great profile bit maybe a tad too long ! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Non-vanilla..... well I can't give any pointers, it's a great profile and the bit about you on all fours yelling condom had me chuckling!
So it's a |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Starbeck.
Concise, spells out the rules straight away.
Great pics!!
This profile warrants no citicism, so from me. "
Lovely profile - a good mix of do's and don't. Politely eliminates my chance though due the height factor |
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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago
Titz Towers, North Notts |
HandyCarl - good creative profile, possibly 1 cock pic too many, though. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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As hornyandhot slipped in I will just say from a personal position the only critique I could have is you don't meet single males!  |
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By *rben112Man
over a year ago
worcester |
"Not much to pick at you about pal"
thank you |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Not really much can be said on Mrben, well written profile and nice selection of photos |
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By *opinovMan
over a year ago
Point Nemo, Cumbria |
"Some more variety in pics x"
That's a very fair point which I've rather neglected.
I'd like to address it when I get the chance... anyone? |
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By *opinovMan
over a year ago
Point Nemo, Cumbria |
@ Juzie A tiny bit of final polishing of the punctuation but, as above, I'm really nit picking here.
I really like the style of your photos - makes me a bit embarrassed at my own, to be honest. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hello to all,
I've enjoyed this thread so far and decided to jump in.
It will be my pleasure to contribute, but I feel strange to comment other solitary male's profiles.  I think I can do better with females or couples (MF) as this is what I am looking for. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Here are my 50 cents:
@hornyandhot123
Good text and great pictures - others can have an idea what you enjoy.
@Non-vanilla Cupcake
Great - the more info the better. Sends clear message that you know what you want.
@_tarbeck
The info will benefit from some paragraphs.
The Gallery is lacking pictures of the gentleman - only one with penis. I am sure you've got more to offer.
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over a year ago
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Little puzzled where you stand as you are on as a single then reference your wife being into swinging as well so are you actually a couple or having fun on the side? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I have been honest and I think is pretty clear. Many couples have separate single profiles, because they have the blessing to play on their own.
My wife doesn't need me to choose her partners for MMMMMMF.
In many couples M is behind the keyboard and making arrangements, but F has no idea at all...
I am sure that the MF with a bit more experience would know what I am talking about. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I have been honest and I think is pretty clear. Many couples have separate single profiles, because they have the blessing to play on their own.
My wife doesn't need me to choose her partners for MMMMMMF.
In many couples M is behind the keyboard and making arrangements, but F has no idea at all...
I am sure that the MF with a bit more experience would know what I am talking about. "
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I have been honest and I think is pretty clear. Many couples have separate single profiles, because they have the blessing to play on their own.
My wife doesn't need me to choose her partners for MMMMMMF.
In many couples M is behind the keyboard and making arrangements, but F has no idea at all...
I am sure that the MF with a bit more experience would know what I am talking about. "
Well then the critique is that you should be clear about this, many couples who play separately reference this with each others and the joint profile.
So that is my constructive criticism as the thread states |
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over a year ago
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No content in profile,three cock photos and one bicep photo,so why no torso or body photo's The usual will update soon yet has been a member for seven months. No verifications. Profile need more content something to get peoples attention and some decent photo's |
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over a year ago
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"No content in profile,three cock photos and one bicep photo,so why no torso or body photo's The usual will update soon yet has been a member for seven months. No verifications. Profile need more content something to get peoples attention and some decent photo's"
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Sophia and Halo - Great and informative profile and well written with a great selection of yummy pics of you both! |
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over a year ago
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"No content in profile,three cock photos and one bicep photo,so why no torso or body photo's The usual will update soon yet has been a member for seven months. No verifications. Profile need more content something to get peoples attention and some decent photo's"
thanx, yours has too much info, so much i cant be bothered to read it all (wont be the first as you well know) and of all your photos i wouldnt class any of them as decent pretty much all the same. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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and as for the safe sex ... hahaha check your photos , dont see too many condoms |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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juzie.... what can i say, before you blocked me from seeing yours i already had and must say your pics are far too gay for a guy who claims to be bi plus you could do with a few years in the gym |
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I like Murphys .its not bitter x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"constructive criticism"
I think someone has struck a nerve with you, hang on we'll all help gather your toys up.
and sure, maybe some time in the gym would be good but I am happy with my lot and happy with the folks I have met. Its as much personality as looks fella and those last comments probably explain why after 7 months you have zero verifications from meets
So good luck....... you really do need it! |
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""constructive criticism"
I think someone has struck a nerve with you, hang on we'll all help gather your toys up.
and sure, maybe some time in the gym would be good but I am happy with my lot and happy with the folks I have met. Its as much personality as looks fella and those last comments probably explain why after 7 months you have zero verifications from meets
So good luck....... you really do need it! "
great profile, was wondering where he's been |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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""constructive criticism"
I think someone has struck a nerve with you, hang on we'll all help gather your toys up.
and sure, maybe some time in the gym would be good but I am happy with my lot and happy with the folks I have met. Its as much personality as looks fella and those last comments probably explain why after 7 months you have zero verifications from meets
So good luck....... you really do need it! great profile, was wondering where he's been "
pm'd about where I have been
great profile as always |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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@Sophia and Halo
Great info, great gallery (both M and F present)! |
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over a year ago
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Drjend
Very good profile. Honest, well written
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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago
A seaside town near you! |
You spelt precious wrong hehe |
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over a year ago
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@diamondsmiles
Well done profile - info, enough pictures in gallery (can see the face and body). |
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over a year ago
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Enigmatic1 - Great profile and lush photos, I always love nice lingerie and of course have a weakness for a sexy woman in stockings and suspenders.... so box ticked there!
Not much more can be said apart from you rival all the other things that make people want to come to blackpool!
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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@_nigmatic1
A bit angry info, but I do understand where is coming from... I real gentleman wouldn't be affected by that, don't worry. |
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""constructive criticism"
I think someone has struck a nerve with you, hang on we'll all help gather your toys up.
and sure, maybe some time in the gym would be good but I am happy with my lot and happy with the folks I have met. Its as much personality as looks fella and those last comments probably explain why after 7 months you have zero verifications from meets
So good luck....... you really do need it! great profile, was wondering where he's been
pm'd about where I have been
great profile as always"
hahaha so not allowed an opinion now even tho youve been following me through the threads posting negative comments to all my replys. (find it funny how people jump on the band wagon without knowing the facts). think I might of hit a nerve...lol
ive had no veris obviously means ive had no meets aswell
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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago
A seaside town near you! |
"@_nigmatic1
A bit angry info, but I do understand where is coming from... I real gentleman wouldn't be affected by that, don't worry. "
The anger is borne out of frustration...I'm moving to Lincoln!!! |
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"@_nigmatic1
A bit angry info, but I do understand where is coming from... I real gentleman wouldn't be affected by that, don't worry.
The anger is borne out of frustration...I'm moving to Lincoln!!! "
Well that will curb the visitors to Blackpool!
NCA loved that hehe |
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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago
A seaside town near you! |
"@_nigmatic1
A bit angry info, but I do understand where is coming from... I real gentleman wouldn't be affected by that, don't worry.
The anger is borne out of frustration...I'm moving to Lincoln!!!
Well that will curb the visitors to Blackpool!
NCA loved that hehe "
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"@_nigmatic1
A bit angry info, but I do understand where is coming from... I real gentleman wouldn't be affected by that, don't worry.
The anger is borne out of frustration...I'm moving to Lincoln!!!
Well that will curb the visitors to Blackpool!
NCA loved that hehe
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Only issue I see with yours is your age range, only because it rules me out! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Think I got lost lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Juzie
Great profile can find anything so just gonna say text is a bit long but don't really mean it |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I think its sound but u look like ur modelling for westlife new album or something lol! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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2 above im on about!! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Juzie
Great profile can find anything so just gonna say text is a bit long but don't really mean it "
Its to out those without the staying power to follow through to the end!! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Set a display picture!
Maybe upload a few more pictures too. (Ironic as I only have 2 public and 2 private)
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over a year ago
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"No content in profile,three cock photos and one bicep photo,so why no torso or body photo's The usual will update soon yet has been a member for seven months. No verifications. Profile need more content something to get peoples attention and some decent photo's
thanx, yours has too much info, so much i cant be bothered to read it all (wont be the first as you well know) and of all your photos i wouldnt class any of them as decent pretty much all the same."
Oh dear, so a typical man can't take constructive criticism, can't be bothered to read profiles but expects people to fall over themselves to get to him. We can clearly see why after 7 months no meets.As for our photos thank goodness not all the people on here think the same as you and we have the fabs to prove it. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"I think its sound but u look like ur modelling for westlife new album or something lol!"
very kind of you to think I look like I am modelling! |
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"Set a display picture!
Maybe upload a few more pictures too. (Ironic as I only have 2 public and 2 private)
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well written profile
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Set a display picture!
Maybe upload a few more pictures too. (Ironic as I only have 2 public and 2 private)
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more photos would be good nice clear ones x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Clear in what you want, good bit on your history and some quality pictures. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Nice profile leaves you wantingt more |
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needs more information and more pics x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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We liked it x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"i give up carnt keep up "
never admit to not being able to keep up lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"i give up carnt keep up "
I'm sure you can keep up! |
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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago
A seaside town near you! |
I'd love someone to keep up hehe |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'd love someone to keep up hehe "
I accept the challenge! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"and as for the safe sex ... hahaha check your photos , dont see too many condoms "
No you don't see condoms but we are a couple and its us in the photos and like most couples on here we don't use protection between ourselves only with people we play with.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'd love someone to keep up hehe "
Not much to add really, good profile and it's pretty clearly stated what you're looking for Props! |
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over a year ago
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"No content in profile,three cock photos and one bicep photo,so why no torso or body photo's The usual will update soon yet has been a member for seven months. No verifications. Profile need more content something to get peoples attention and some decent photo's
thanx, yours has too much info, so much i cant be bothered to read it all (wont be the first as you well know) and of all your photos i wouldnt class any of them as decent pretty much all the same.
Oh dear, so a typical man can't take constructive criticism, can't be bothered to read profiles but expects people to fall over themselves to get to him. We can clearly see why after 7 months no meets.As for our photos thank goodness not all the people on here think the same as you and we have the fabs to prove it. "
WOW one of the most hypocritical replys i have ever come across....
you come to THIS thread and criticise a profile but cant take it your self even tho im being honest and you say my pics arnet decent because they are all the same (as are yours...?) and you sterotype all guys (even guys in a couple?).
and as i said before too much info for me and probably most people (so that would be constructive again). not to mention you only posted in the first place because you thought i was being an ass to someone else (and was wrong)...
...sorry if this is too long |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"and as for the safe sex ... hahaha check your photos , dont see too many condoms
No you don't see condoms but we are a couple and its us in the photos and like most couples on here we don't use protection between ourselves only with people we play with. "
so who are you the couple with, the guy with no condom whos having his cock sucked or the woman with th double ended dildo with no protection |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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nothing more to say to you two. you know who you are |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"nothing more to say to you two. you know who you are "
You could do with a few more pics! Torso, bum etc, profiles a little brief.
But what really threw me was, you'll meet couples any age? Really? |
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