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By *batMan
over a year ago
Alicante, Spain. (Sometimes in Wales) |
You're picture verified and verified by other users. (so that's good).
Your profile is very brief and doesn't say what you are looking for or what you can offer. It's more negative than positive. (bad).
There is only one pic showing (outside your Friends Gallery) and whilst it shows your face (good) it doesn't show much else (bad).
You've got that ludicrous semi threatening thing about using your pictures without permission. Who will you report violators too and how will you prosecute them? (Very bad).
In short, I think your profile could be improved by adding more detail, both in the written word and in pictures. You could certainly do with removing the non-sensical empty threat about prosecution.
Best of luck,
Gbat
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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago
Titz Towers, North Notts |
You could do with more pics.
The formatting is a bit out - it looks as if you've hit the return button instead of carrying on on the same line.
The bit about the bi chaps sounds a touch aggressive. Just block single guys, or phrase it more delicately, as it really is abrupt.
Above all, though, there's no indication of YOU in your blurb. You could do with showing some personality off there. |
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