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By *.London OP Man
over a year ago
london |
Would anybody be kind enough to review my profile and maybe give some tips on improving it?
Let's get a thread going if you'd like yours reviewed aswell post below happy Saturday everybody enjoy your day x |
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I ’m no expert on what others would consider a good profile but I think yours does almost everything it needs to. A couple of good photos (Although a few more wouldn’t hurt) and a video that shows what you have going on.
The only thing I’d suggest is telling people what you are either into or looking for.
Rob |
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By *.London OP Man
over a year ago
london |
"I ’m no expert on what others would consider a good profile but I think yours does almost everything it needs to. A couple of good photos (Although a few more wouldn’t hurt) and a video that shows what you have going on.
The only thing I’d suggest is telling people what you are either into or looking for.
Rob"
Thanks Rob much appreciated btw hot profile! |
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You appear to be a good looking chap. A few more photos would help - some stylish ones in a suit and tie go down well here. Profile photo is a bit meh tbh.
Your bio could be better - instead of saying happy to do a social (sounds like that is secondary and a hurdle when worded like that) say you enjoy the social side and like meets to be relaxed, organised and to build a fun connection over a drink and see what happens- 99% of women on here look for this 99% of the time. |
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Also -friend is spelt incorrectly!
"Wink first for me to message you" is how winks work - the sentence doesn't really mean much so I'd lose it from your bio. Try and project confidence and like you have been here before and know how it all works |
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By *.London OP Man
over a year ago
london |
"The video won't win any women over. I'd set it to friends only and that can lead to a bit of intrigue at least"
Thanks for the reply smoothcriminal exactly what I was looking for will take note and give my profile a good refresh in the coming days new to this type of stuff and I can admit I knew my profile was abit crap so much appreciated for the help! Hope you have a lovely evening |
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"The video won't win any women over. I'd set it to friends only and that can lead to a bit of intrigue at least
Thanks for the reply smoothcriminal exactly what I was looking for will take note and give my profile a good refresh in the coming days new to this type of stuff and I can admit I knew my profile was abit crap so much appreciated for the help! Hope you have a lovely evening "
Good luck dude. All friendly advice not being a dick lol. It's hard work on here so we need to support each other! |
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By *.London OP Man
over a year ago
london |
"The video won't win any women over. I'd set it to friends only and that can lead to a bit of intrigue at least
Thanks for the reply smoothcriminal exactly what I was looking for will take note and give my profile a good refresh in the coming days new to this type of stuff and I can admit I knew my profile was abit crap so much appreciated for the help! Hope you have a lovely evening
Good luck dude. All friendly advice not being a dick lol. It's hard work on here so we need to support each other!"
no offence taken man really appreciated the detailed reply! And I agree completely some sites can be pretty brutal. |
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Not enough images and profile is vague. You state about not being into guys, that’s fine but you state you’re looking for MF couples and there is going to be closeness if you catch my drift. So perhaps say you’re ok in close proximity to another guy. Your only veri is also from a guy so we’d suggest going to a social or club to gain more. Obviously only our opinion and others will have a different view. V&K xx |
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