Generally an okay profile but here is my input (for what it’s worth!).
1. Lose the photos with the black boxes over your face - looks odd, you are showing enough of yourself for someone that knows you to recognise you anyway. So either bin or show your face.
2. 100% straight - sounds a bit OTT and defensive - your profile already says you’re straight so need to repeat it.
3. Cannot accommodate - this is a red flag for many and the assumption will be that you are attached unless you explain.
4. Not sure why you’d post your KIK for any random to message?
5. Swimming pool photo - do you really need the one at night as well?
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By *harAndBryCouple
over a year ago
Peterborough / Stamford |
Nothing really that wrong with it, but also nothing to make it stand out. This pics are okay, though the black boxes always look a bit Crimewatch to me, and mirror photos never look like they've had much effort put in.
Nice to see you've taken advice on board - that rarely happens in these parts!
The text though...it's all a bit *meh* and heard it all before. We've explained our maths and how we genuinely only need 1% of the offers we receive. It's really easy to get in the bottom 80%, and it's dead hard to get in the top 5% but it's really easy to fall into that 15% that are written okay, inoffensive but don't actually say anything interesting.
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