"Check out my profile and let me know what you think please. Where could I make improvements?"
Try reading it from the perspective of the person you’d like to meet.
Personally I would remove anything about quality over quantity it just sounds trite
I also read that as pretty much 80% what you want and 20% what you’ve got to offer. Maybe try the other way around.
Photos could be more classy, would prefer to see teasing shots over just a cock hanging out. That’s my preference though.
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