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over a year ago
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Keep the first sentence and the fourth sentence of your profile text. The rest makes you sound clichéd, in other words write everything in your own voice.
If you say your kind you need to smile in your photos.
The picture with the nice suit needs to be larger it would be better to be able to see your face.
Good luck.
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Keep the first sentence and the fourth sentence of your profile text. The rest makes you sound clichéd, in other words write everything in your own voice.
If you say your kind you need to smile in your photos.
The picture with the nice suit needs to be larger it would be better to be able to see your face.
Good luck.
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I'd lose the first sentence. The username tells us about the skin and nationality. And we can see he's 6'1. |
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over a year ago
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Very generic, very average profile text. Could be about anybody. There's a lot of it I'd get rid of - partly because the information is available elsewhere on your profile, whereas other parts of it don't actually reveal anything at all. |
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