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By *ed wine OP Man
over a year ago
Where the streets have no name |
I've been here for a while and I reckon it's time to refurbish my profile. My current text and pics give a close idea of my preferences towards style, flirting and passion.
What would you change? |
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By *sm265Woman
over a year ago
Shangri-la |
It's not a bad profile at all.
Possibly a bit too theatrical for some people, but I'd say it gives a good idea of your personality and interests.
Pics show a bit more creativity than a lot of male profiles.
Couple of spelling mistakes though |
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By *ed wine OP Man
over a year ago
Where the streets have no name |
"It's not a bad profile at all.
Possibly a bit too theatrical for some people, but I'd say it gives a good idea of your personality and interests.
Pics show a bit more creativity than a lot of male profiles.
Couple of spelling mistakes though"
I will check the spelling  |
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"I've been here for a while and I reckon it's time to refurbish my profile. My current text and pics give a close idea of my preferences towards style, flirting and passion.
What would you change?"
All of it
From the use of the world's worst disclaimer, "ladyboys" the fact you think channelling Christian Grey is attractive, wierd caps, breaking the 4th wall, general pretension and you arent as witty, or as clever as you think you are
Otherwise it's fine
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By *ed wine OP Man
over a year ago
Where the streets have no name |
"I've been here for a while and I reckon it's time to refurbish my profile. My current text and pics give a close idea of my preferences towards style, flirting and passion.
What would you change?
All of it
From the use of the world's worst disclaimer, "ladyboys" the fact you think channelling Christian Grey is attractive, wierd caps, breaking the 4th wall, general pretension and you arent as witty, or as clever as you think you are
Otherwise it's fine
Ms Icebreaker "
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"I've been here for a while and I reckon it's time to refurbish my profile. My current text and pics give a close idea of my preferences towards style, flirting and passion.
What would you change?
All of it
From the use of the world's worst disclaimer, "ladyboys" the fact you think channelling Christian Grey is attractive, wierd caps, breaking the 4th wall, general pretension and you arent as witty, or as clever as you think you are
Otherwise it's fine
Ms Icebreaker
Ouch "
That's the thing about profiles, they won't appeal to everyone. Just because one person finds it doesn't appeal to their idea of wit and intelligence doesn't mean it won't appeal to others.
If you feel it reflects you it will attract people who want to meet a person like you, not a mish mash of what several people say they like.
For what it's worth I think it's fine. The legal bit is meaningless but that's easy to solve. Your pictures are good and far better than !many.
Stick with it, get into conversation on the forum and see where things go.
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By *ed wine OP Man
over a year ago
Where the streets have no name |
"I've been here for a while and I reckon it's time to refurbish my profile. My current text and pics give a close idea of my preferences towards style, flirting and passion.
What would you change?
All of it
From the use of the world's worst disclaimer, "ladyboys" the fact you think channelling Christian Grey is attractive, wierd caps, breaking the 4th wall, general pretension and you arent as witty, or as clever as you think you are
Otherwise it's fine
Ms Icebreaker
Ouch
That's the thing about profiles, they won't appeal to everyone. Just because one person finds it doesn't appeal to their idea of wit and intelligence doesn't mean it won't appeal to others.
If you feel it reflects you it will attract people who want to meet a person like you, not a mish mash of what several people say they like.
For what it's worth I think it's fine. The legal bit is meaningless but that's easy to solve. Your pictures are good and far better than !many.
Stick with it, get into conversation on the forum and see where things go.
Good luck "
Thanks for your advice.
Of course, I don't expect to attract everyone. In terms of assumptions on inteligence, well, ignorance reveals itself. Nothing else to add... 
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"I've been here for a while and I reckon it's time to refurbish my profile. My current text and pics give a close idea of my preferences towards style, flirting and passion.
What would you change?"
It's interesting to be fair! It reads a bit like a dramatic play or script of some sort. It's slightly unconventional, but yes, it's interesting.
There are some grammatical issues and for me, you have slightly too much confidence. The bit about "pleasing the woman" or something, and the bit about dick size. I think that may put one or two off. The reason being is that women are often reading self-certified bulls, etc. These guys often don't perform.
The lady may read; "Oh another one!".
But yes, good profile! The pics are smart and happy, the profile text is positive too.
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By *ed wine OP Man
over a year ago
Where the streets have no name |
"I've been here for a while and I reckon it's time to refurbish my profile. My current text and pics give a close idea of my preferences towards style, flirting and passion.
What would you change?
It's interesting to be fair! It reads a bit like a dramatic play or script of some sort. It's slightly unconventional, but yes, it's interesting.
There are some grammatical issues and for me, you have slightly too much confidence. The bit about "pleasing the woman" or something, and the bit about dick size. I think that may put one or two off. The reason being is that women are often reading self-certified bulls, etc. These guys often don't perform.
The lady may read; "Oh another one!".
But yes, good profile! The pics are smart and happy, the profile text is positive too.
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By *ed wine OP Man
over a year ago
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"Far better than most. Lovely photos, interesting and engaging text.
Photo update needed however x "
Yes, I must update the pics. I have some ideas in mind 
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If you take a cross section of male profiles and put yours in the pack. You are well up there close to the top end of the list.
Shows that if a single male thinks about it and dos something a little different you will attract prospective partners. Which you have achieved.
Keeping it up to date and fresh will always be good thing.
And everyone should review there own profile every few months.
Fresh is interesting. Interesting gives better opportunities to mingle.
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By *ed wine OP Man
over a year ago
Where the streets have no name |
"If you take a cross section of male profiles and put yours in the pack. You are well up there close to the top end of the list.
Shows that if a single male thinks about it and dos something a little different you will attract prospective partners. Which you have achieved.
Keeping it up to date and fresh will always be good thing.
And everyone should review there own profile every few months.
Fresh is interesting. Interesting gives better opportunities to mingle.
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You are right. We have to reinvent ourselves now and then, haven't we? New challenges, new roads....
Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it |
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