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By *luvva OP Man
over a year ago
lincoln ,Nationwide |
Hi could I ask anyladies or couples to check my profile for me please? I have been on here a long time and had reviews etc but took a break due to work and life changes and now simply cannot get a meet. I would be greatful to know if there is anything I have missed on my profile that is a "Put Off"?
It would be appreciated.
Thanks Rob |
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It's not a terrible profile but it's also not incredibly outstanding - and it would probably benefit from being more so, to pull you out from your lull and break.
It certainly has to represent you, rather than be a top PR company's spin on you. A tidy will help it, if nothing else - such as occasional capital letters midsentence, like Firm.
Some of the current content could be consolidated, so it's more concise, such as your emphasis on humour in it, but anything dragged out, streamline it.
It's a little tedious to read, so lighter and no meanderings could improve this.
Remove any warnings, they're a waste of words.
It's got to sell you better to those who will find you attractive. They'll need to appreciate your physical looks - only photos will do this. Add a range of pics. If you don't spark a light, viewers move on.
View a lot of single mens profiles and pick our patterns that are pitfalls or inspiring and eye catching, making a good read. View a lot of them so that you get a sense of what other men are doing and how their approaches overall can inspire you to present yourself. Ultimately, viewers will want to be intrigued, attracted and have a feel for what you can do for them and less about what you want. |
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