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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hey fabbers,
We've re-written our profile, in light of our recent experiences of fab, and would love some constructive criticism.
Care to have a read and let us know how we come across? I'm aware we need more pictures of Tom, and will be working on that over the next couple of weeks..
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To me it seems very good, clearly states intent and gives a flavour of your dynamic. You will face criticism for your description of yourselves in your first paragraph although I have no problem with it  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Seems to be a very well thought out profile  maybe a couple of pics of you both together would enhance it more but in my humble opinion you have a good profile
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Thank you Yes, I'm working on the together pics. We have some private ones that we send if we feel there's something to explore, but Tom can be camera shy. The only shy he is, mind you! xx Niki  |
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"Hey fabbers,
We've re-written our profile, in light of our recent experiences of fab, and would love some constructive criticism.
Care to have a read and let us know how we come across? I'm aware we need more pictures of Tom, and will be working on that over the next couple of weeks..
xx Niki"
I think it's a great read and the mrs is a very sexy woman and from what I can see of the guys body mmmm hopefully hes tasty too I can see you both going far xx ... before anyone asks I know it says straight on my profile but I am actually bi just haven't put it on as I dont want to be made to feel like the unicorn toy xx lol x |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"To me it seems very good, clearly states intent and gives a flavour of your dynamic. You will face criticism for your description of yourselves in your first paragraph although I have no problem with it "
Thanks for your feedback - I know and expected criticism on the professional bit and I did consider leaving it out, but at the end of the day, we want to meet like minded people that can string a sentence, so fully expecting some flack for it! We are who we are...not everyone will like us.
PS: yeah - pictures of the elusive Tom to follow soon! 
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"To me it seems very good, clearly states intent and gives a flavour of your dynamic. You will face criticism for your description of yourselves in your first paragraph although I have no problem with it
Thanks for your feedback - I know and expected criticism on the professional bit and I did consider leaving it out, but at the end of the day, we want to meet like minded people that can string a sentence, so fully expecting some flack for it! We are who we are...not everyone will like us.
PS: yeah - pictures of the elusive Tom to follow soon!
xx Niki"
Damn right! I've no idea why it causes such drama.
Anyway, good luck with your new profile |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Hey fabbers,
We've re-written our profile, in light of our recent experiences of fab, and would love some constructive criticism.
Care to have a read and let us know how we come across? I'm aware we need more pictures of Tom, and will be working on that over the next couple of weeks..
xx Niki
I think it's a great read and the mrs is a very sexy woman and from what I can see of the guys body mmmm hopefully hes tasty too I can see you both going far xx ... before anyone asks I know it says straight on my profile but I am actually bi just haven't put it on as I dont want to be made to feel like the unicorn toy xx lol x "
Wow, thank you! Yes, I know many women that have put straight on the bio, but are actually bi. I get a lot of couples treat bi ladies as a sex toy - I hope it comes across on our profile that we are not like that. But thanks again for your feedback...
xx Niki |
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"Seems to be a very well thought out profile maybe a couple of pics of you both together would enhance it more but in my humble opinion you have a good profile
D.
Thank you Yes, I'm working on the together pics. We have some private ones that we send if we feel there's something to explore, but Tom can be camera shy. The only shy he is, mind you! xx Niki "
I am also very camera shy (well I was ) what we found helped was just having fun with the pics, if you manage to get a decent pic out of it great, if not, try again later 
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Seems to be a very well thought out profile maybe a couple of pics of you both together would enhance it more but in my humble opinion you have a good profile
D.
Thank you Yes, I'm working on the together pics. We have some private ones that we send if we feel there's something to explore, but Tom can be camera shy. The only shy he is, mind you! xx Niki
I am also very camera shy (well I was ) what we found helped was just having fun with the pics, if you manage to get a decent pic out of it great, if not, try again later
D."
Thanks, I'm not camera shy, but trying to pin Tom down for a photo is excruciating!!! LOL! Wouldn't mind but he's a good looking chap too, so very annoying.
Anyway, Santa brought me a tripod that I can use with my phone, and I'm planning on putting it to very good use!
xx Niki |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"The bio looks fine to me. Well written profile
Thank you! xx Niki
C is camera shy as well so I know that struggle of pics all too well x"
I reckon I can tie him up and blindfold him.
xx Niki |
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"Hey fabbers,
We've re-written our profile, in light of our recent experiences of fab, and would love some constructive criticism.
Care to have a read and let us know how we come across? I'm aware we need more pictures of Tom, and will be working on that over the next couple of weeks..
xx Niki
I think it's a great read and the mrs is a very sexy woman and from what I can see of the guys body mmmm hopefully hes tasty too I can see you both going far xx ... before anyone asks I know it says straight on my profile but I am actually bi just haven't put it on as I dont want to be made to feel like the unicorn toy xx lol x
Wow, thank you! Yes, I know many women that have put straight on the bio, but are actually bi. I get a lot of couples treat bi ladies as a sex toy - I hope it comes across on our profile that we are not like that. But thanks again for your feedback...
xx Niki"
I love your profile would certainly have me interested |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Hey fabbers,
We've re-written our profile, in light of our recent experiences of fab, and would love some constructive criticism.
Care to have a read and let us know how we come across? I'm aware we need more pictures of Tom, and will be working on that over the next couple of weeks..
xx Niki
I think it's a great read and the mrs is a very sexy woman and from what I can see of the guys body mmmm hopefully hes tasty too I can see you both going far xx ... before anyone asks I know it says straight on my profile but I am actually bi just haven't put it on as I dont want to be made to feel like the unicorn toy xx lol x
Wow, thank you! Yes, I know many women that have put straight on the bio, but are actually bi. I get a lot of couples treat bi ladies as a sex toy - I hope it comes across on our profile that we are not like that. But thanks again for your feedback...
xx Niki
I love your profile would certainly have me interested "
Do feel free to message us - you are a bit far, but if there is a connection then we'd be happy to travel or meet at a club. xx Niki |
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"Hey fabbers,
We've re-written our profile, in light of our recent experiences of fab, and would love some constructive criticism.
Care to have a read and let us know how we come across? I'm aware we need more pictures of Tom, and will be working on that over the next couple of weeks..
xx Niki
I think it's a great read and the mrs is a very sexy woman and from what I can see of the guys body mmmm hopefully hes tasty too I can see you both going far xx ... before anyone asks I know it says straight on my profile but I am actually bi just haven't put it on as I dont want to be made to feel like the unicorn toy xx lol x
Wow, thank you! Yes, I know many women that have put straight on the bio, but are actually bi. I get a lot of couples treat bi ladies as a sex toy - I hope it comes across on our profile that we are not like that. But thanks again for your feedback...
xx Niki
I love your profile would certainly have me interested
Do feel free to message us - you are a bit far, but if there is a connection then we'd be happy to travel or meet at a club. xx Niki"
Think my family live near you they are about 70 miles away Haha if your ever in this neck of the woods feel free to msg me I will say hi to remove my filter for you xx |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I liked your written profile - sure you will be successful.
Personally, I wasn't too keen on the pics, although you obviously look amazing but I thought they would appeal a lot to men."
Ooh, now that's really constructive. So what kind of pics do you think would appeal to women more? Would be keen to find out...
Thanks.
xx Niki |
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By *andKBCouple
over a year ago
Plymouth |
"The bio looks fine to me. Well written profile
Thank you! xx Niki
C is camera shy as well so I know that struggle of pics all too well x
I reckon I can tie him up and blindfold him.
xx Niki"
I woudlnt be brave enough to do that to C!! I mean I'm a brat and I like to push his buttons but I'm almost certain that would result in the cane haha |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"The bio looks fine to me. Well written profile
Thank you! xx Niki
C is camera shy as well so I know that struggle of pics all too well x
I reckon I can tie him up and blindfold him.
xx Niki
I woudlnt be brave enough to do that to C!! I mean I'm a brat and I like to push his buttons but I'm almost certain that would result in the cane haha "
haha - I'll also be in serious trouble if he reads this, but he NEVER comes on forums so I may just try. I reckon the results will be worth the trouble! LOL
xx N |
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By *andKBCouple
over a year ago
Plymouth |
"The bio looks fine to me. Well written profile
Thank you! xx Niki
C is camera shy as well so I know that struggle of pics all too well x
I reckon I can tie him up and blindfold him.
xx Niki
I woudlnt be brave enough to do that to C!! I mean I'm a brat and I like to push his buttons but I'm almost certain that would result in the cane haha
haha - I'll also be in serious trouble if he reads this, but he NEVER comes on forums so I may just try. I reckon the results will be worth the trouble! LOL
xx N"
C does occasionally so I better behave.
First time for everything hahaha |
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By *rufinWoman
over a year ago
notts |
"I liked your written profile - sure you will be successful.
Personally, I wasn't too keen on the pics, although you obviously look amazing but I thought they would appeal a lot to men.
Ooh, now that's really constructive. So what kind of pics do you think would appeal to women more? Would be keen to find out...
Thanks.
xx Niki"
I wish I could be more helpful on that!! I don't know what it was, but it felt like they were all the kinds of photos men like but most of them didn't do too much for me. That isn't at all a criticism of you, your body or your lingerie - all of which are great! It might have been the poses as well as some of the underwear. What do you wear with threesomes with women and what makes you hot when you look at photos of women? If it's the same, then this might just be 'me' and just ignore. Essentially, they felt too 'male gaze'. More couples and him photos might be enough to balance things out. |
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By *irtySexyDawgsCouple
over a year ago
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"Hey fabbers,
We've re-written our profile, in light of our recent experiences of fab, and would love some constructive criticism.
Care to have a read and let us know how we come across? I'm aware we need more pictures of Tom, and will be working on that over the next couple of weeks..
xx Niki"
Nice work, but seems kinda wordy to me. The few who do read a bio need to get a feel for you and your desires quickly...less is more etc blah. |
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By *mberWoman
over a year ago
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I really liked your bio, I feel like I sort of know you from it, in a good way.
More male photos would be good (because he's hot) but only having two wouldn't put me off. I don't think you need as many female photos (even though you are stunning as well) |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I liked your written profile - sure you will be successful.
Personally, I wasn't too keen on the pics, although you obviously look amazing but I thought they would appeal a lot to men.
Ooh, now that's really constructive. So what kind of pics do you think would appeal to women more? Would be keen to find out...
Thanks.
xx Niki
I wish I could be more helpful on that!! I don't know what it was, but it felt like they were all the kinds of photos men like but most of them didn't do too much for me. That isn't at all a criticism of you, your body or your lingerie - all of which are great! It might have been the poses as well as some of the underwear. What do you wear with threesomes with women and what makes you hot when you look at photos of women? If it's the same, then this might just be 'me' and just ignore. Essentially, they felt too 'male gaze'. More couples and him photos might be enough to balance things out."
You are really kind, thank you for trying! I may do some research on women looking out for women (had a sneaky peak of your profile too!  ) and look at the kind of pictures! Thanks again x Niki |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Hey fabbers,
We've re-written our profile, in light of our recent experiences of fab, and would love some constructive criticism.
Care to have a read and let us know how we come across? I'm aware we need more pictures of Tom, and will be working on that over the next couple of weeks..
xx Niki
Nice work, but seems kinda wordy to me. The few who do read a bio need to get a feel for you and your desires quickly...less is more etc blah. "
Thanks, and what a concise profile you have! I may try and condense a little - I'm naturally a bit wordy though! xx Niki
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Some pictures are repetitive. And only 2 pictures of a male - could do with a few more to even it up."
Definitely and thanks for the feedback.
xx Niki |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"I really liked your bio, I feel like I sort of know you from it, in a good way.
More male photos would be good (because he's hot) but only having two wouldn't put me off. I don't think you need as many female photos (even though you are stunning as well)"
Really kind feedback, thank you. Yes, I'll get some more photos of him when I get chance - was planning on tonight, but now we have family descending on us! 
xx Niki
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I really like your profile.
As a bi lady, if I were looking to meet couples, the content would reassure me that I was not just a play thing.
The only thing I would change, is to remove the words "No offence", as I don't think it needs saying. |
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I agree that the pics are a bit repetitive. The first five, for example, are all pretty much the same. And two of the July ones are identical. (How do you get the red knickers off from under the black outfit ?) |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"I agree that the pics are a bit repetitive. The first five, for example, are all pretty much the same. And two of the July ones are identical. (How do you get the red knickers off from under the black outfit ?)"
Mrs as amazing legs that’s why there’s 5 pictures  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"I really like your profile.
As a bi lady, if I were looking to meet couples, the content would reassure me that I was not just a play thing.
The only thing I would change, is to remove the words "No offence", as I don't think it needs saying."
Good point, thank you! x Niki |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"I agree that the pics are a bit repetitive. The first five, for example, are all pretty much the same. And two of the July ones are identical. (How do you get the red knickers off from under the black outfit ?)"
Knickers don't need taking off, Sally, they're crotchless! Thanks for your feedback, the first two are the same with different lighting so will delete one of them - the other 3 are same santa outfit in different poses...
Thanks for your feedback, appreciate you taking time to have a look. xx Niki |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"I agree that the pics are a bit repetitive. The first five, for example, are all pretty much the same. And two of the July ones are identical. (How do you get the red knickers off from under the black outfit ?)Mrs as amazing legs that’s why there’s 5 pictures "
You're too kind on my chunky runners legs,, lovely compliment! Not bad for being called thunder thighs in high school, eh?
xx Niki
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