It seems fine. I'm not your target audience but your user and profile names would put me off. There are a couple of spelling mistakes e.g. it's "cuckold" but none of us is perfect.
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Hi, I had a massive nose wrinkling response to you having the name Smeg.smegma isn't going to appeal to anyone is it ?? Your profile text ...yeah, can't put my finger on what it conveys but yes, even though you are not a match for us, I'd find it off-putting, maybe too flippant. Spend 30 mins rewording it maybe |
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"This is probably a common question asked so I apologise.
My profile, could it be any better? All criticism welcome. The amount of times I've changed it coz it doesn't quite seem right."
Honestly - it's meh and confusing you want to dom, and sub, smileys appear mid sentence, and it's disjointed. If you are a switch say so, use it as a selling point.
Tidy it up, rather than disjointed sentences give it a start middle and end
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