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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Ive seen other threads where people profiles get roasted. I know mine is far too long. And I need more pics (esp of us both ).
Any advice on which bits of text I should cut please? |
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Generally I think three paragraphs is about right (although my profile is quite long  ) so for a couple look at around six paragraphs.
Pictures; three toys and one of the Lady (lovely picture  ) where is the guy, even if it’s a body picture, also one of you two together, wearing lingerie or an outfit you’d wear in a club, would be great.
Profile, details are great but nobody will want to spend too much time trying to find out if you’re going to match. Remove everything that is already on your description, Bi and Straight is just under your age. So you don’t need to write it on your profile, there’s one sentence gone already.
Take this as constructive but you don’t half waffle on  you can not only ‘talk for England’ your words ! but certainly write for us as well.
Maybe the fantasies bits could be shortened and more details given, when you are messaging another couple or lady.
What you certainly don’t want to remove is your personality, which is in abundance and made me smile when I was reading it. You’re a likeable person it comes across fully within the text. And at a club I’ve no doubt people would gravitate towards you.
However a profile just needs to be a snapshot of you and your partner.
I truly hope you are successful on here, good luck and enjoy |
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