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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Good evening folks, thought I’d follow suit of the single gents on here and ask for some constructive criticism on my profile. I’m thick skinned so I won’t cry and stomp my feet. Just wanted to see if there’s anything I should add or remove. |
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We're not looking for single guys but if we were, your profile reads pretty well compared to some. You've clearly read up on things & taken the time to write more than a few lines.
Not quite sure what the 2nd pic is about & am assuming you have face pics in your Friends Only Section.
Good luck!
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Really good profile. My personal put off would be the opening section about a partner in crime to make porn vids. Other women might also find it alienating.
More pics would help. You’re right to avoid cock pics.
Clubs and socials will help you get known so are definitely worth attending.
Good luck  x |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"We're not looking for single guys but if we were, your profile reads pretty well compared to some. You've clearly read up on things & taken the time to write more than a few lines.
Not quite sure what the 2nd pic is about & am assuming you have face pics in your Friends Only Section.
Good luck!
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Thank you for your input 
Yes I do have face pics which I always send with initial message |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's a good profile OP, I'd probably message you back based on that . I'd perhaps agree about the part about making porn videos, maybe put that at the end rather than the first thing you read? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Really good profile. My personal put off would be the opening section about a partner in crime to make porn vids. Other women might also find it alienating.
More pics would help. You’re right to avoid cock pics.
Clubs and socials will help you get known so are definitely worth attending.
Good luck x"
Yeah I get what your saying, it was only after watching those vids that I added it. Can see it may come across off putting, hence why I added ‘we can dream’
Once again, thanks for your input |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"It's a good profile OP, I'd probably message you back based on that . I'd perhaps agree about the part about making porn videos, maybe put that at the end rather than the first thing you read?"
Yeah agreed
Maybe that should have gone as a status update instead |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Don't be a pussy get it oot hahaha "
Typical single woman, always asking for dick pics and if they’re not sent you’ll send me loads of abuse and I’ll be forced to block your wee Scottish booty |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Don't be a pussy get it oot hahaha
Typical single woman, always asking for dick pics and if they’re not sent you’ll send me loads of abuse and I’ll be forced to block your wee Scottish booty "
You don't have the heart to block me  I'm a delight |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Don't be a pussy get it oot hahaha
Typical single woman, always asking for dick pics and if they’re not sent you’ll send me loads of abuse and I’ll be forced to block your wee Scottish booty
You don't have the heart to block me I'm a delight "
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Don't be a pussy get it oot hahaha
Typical single woman, always asking for dick pics and if they’re not sent you’ll send me loads of abuse and I’ll be forced to block your wee Scottish booty
You don't have the heart to block me I'm a delight
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Good evening folks, thought I’d follow suit of the single gents on here and ask for some constructive criticism on my profile. I’m thick skinned so I won’t cry and stomp my feet. Just wanted to see if there’s anything I should add or remove. "
Lose the thick skin. I filed the rough skin off my feet and the ladies then flocked  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Good evening folks, thought I’d follow suit of the single gents on here and ask for some constructive criticism on my profile. I’m thick skinned so I won’t cry and stomp my feet. Just wanted to see if there’s anything I should add or remove.
Lose the thick skin. I filed the rough skin off my feet and the ladies then flocked "
Hahaha that’s the best advice yet! I’ll get the sander out |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Good evening folks, thought I’d follow suit of the single gents on here and ask for some constructive criticism on my profile. I’m thick skinned so I won’t cry and stomp my feet. Just wanted to see if there’s anything I should add or remove.
Lose the thick skin. I filed the rough skin off my feet and the ladies then flocked
Hahaha that’s the best advice yet! I’ll get the sander out "
I'm not helping with that task |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Good evening folks, thought I’d follow suit of the single gents on here and ask for some constructive criticism on my profile. I’m thick skinned so I won’t cry and stomp my feet. Just wanted to see if there’s anything I should add or remove.
Lose the thick skin. I filed the rough skin off my feet and the ladies then flocked
Hahaha that’s the best advice yet! I’ll get the sander out
I'm not helping with that task "
I need someone to hold it up |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Congratulations! One of the best profiles I've read in a very long time. Best of luck xx"
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That’s very nice of you to say 
Thank you for your comment |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly 
My Prince Albert 
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start "
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 |
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"Probably a tad too long...remove s few paragraphs
Hard to find a happy medium, too long, too short. "
..even with good intentions most readers will only give most profiles a few seconds overview and move on |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Probably a tad too long...remove s few paragraphs
Hard to find a happy medium, too long, too short. ..even with good intentions most readers will only give most profiles a few seconds overview and move on"
Fair point
Thank you |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 "
yes boss  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 yes boss "
Good girl |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Good profile. More pics would help. And you say "hope you all have fun". Also "maybe join you" - in what? "
‘Hope you all have fun, and maybe I’ll join you one day’
I was aiming that at the ‘fun’ bit |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Good profile. More pics would help. And you say "hope you all have fun". Also "maybe join you" - in what? "
You said more pics would help!
I’ve just checked yours and you have 1 more pic than me, and that’s of your cock! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 yes boss
Good girl"
Got me confused with someone else mr |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 yes boss
Good girl
Got me confused with someone else mr "
How could I confuse you with anyone else |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 yes boss
Good girl
Got me confused with someone else mr
How could I confuse you with anyone else "
Good point, in all seriousness your profile is great. Your conversations are good too, very polite and playful but very respectful my favourite friend on here |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 yes boss
Good girl
Got me confused with someone else mr
How could I confuse you with anyone else
Good point, in all seriousness your profile is great. Your conversations are good too, very polite and playful but very respectful my favourite friend on here "
Awwww |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 yes boss
Good girl
Got me confused with someone else mr
How could I confuse you with anyone else
Good point, in all seriousness your profile is great. Your conversations are good too, very polite and playful but very respectful my favourite friend on here
Awwww "
Dont act coy now Haha |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 yes boss
Good girl
Got me confused with someone else mr
How could I confuse you with anyone else
Good point, in all seriousness your profile is great. Your conversations are good too, very polite and playful but very respectful my favourite friend on here
Awwww
Dont act coy now Haha "
Ok, I’ll let out a Sid James ‘corrrrrrrr’ just for you |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 yes boss
Good girl
Got me confused with someone else mr
How could I confuse you with anyone else
Good point, in all seriousness your profile is great. Your conversations are good too, very polite and playful but very respectful my favourite friend on here
Awwww
Dont act coy now Haha
Ok, I’ll let out a Sid James ‘corrrrrrrr’ just for you "
Who's sid James? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Hold what exactly
My Prince Albert
Can I please best job yet
No need for an interview, you’re hired
Woop when do.i start
Immediately! Don’t be late or you’ll be on the naughty step on day 1 yes boss
Good girl
Got me confused with someone else mr
How could I confuse you with anyone else
Good point, in all seriousness your profile is great. Your conversations are good too, very polite and playful but very respectful my favourite friend on here
Awwww
Dont act coy now Haha
Ok, I’ll let out a Sid James ‘corrrrrrrr’ just for you
Who's sid James? "
Oh my 
I’m showing my age now! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Good evening folks, thought I’d follow suit of the single gents on here and ask for some constructive criticism on my profile. I’m thick skinned so I won’t cry and stomp my feet. Just wanted to see if there’s anything I should add or remove. "
The word NOT appears far too often |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Good evening folks, thought I’d follow suit of the single gents on here and ask for some constructive criticism on my profile. I’m thick skinned so I won’t cry and stomp my feet. Just wanted to see if there’s anything I should add or remove.
The word NOT appears far too often"
If that's the only thing you can find wrong with his profile it's still a winner |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Good evening folks, thought I’d follow suit of the single gents on here and ask for some constructive criticism on my profile. I’m thick skinned so I won’t cry and stomp my feet. Just wanted to see if there’s anything I should add or remove.
The word NOT appears far too often"
I’ll take that criticism, I guess it’s better than constant use of the ‘cock’ and dick pics |
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