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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi. I've been on and off fab a good few years now but its not quite fulfilling my wants and needs so opening up to some profile feedback if anyone would care to indulge me? "
It’s very clear - like a menu
Bit shouty - repeating BE makes it sound angry
Be
Single
BBW lover
Able to accom
Etc ... you sound fed up of poor Messages ( we are )
But relax it a bit
Nice pics btw |
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By *inkySeeKinkyDo OP Woman
over a year ago
'tween PontyCarlo & CasVegas in West Yorks |
"Hi. I've been on and off fab a good few years now but its not quite fulfilling my wants and needs so opening up to some profile feedback if anyone would care to indulge me?
It’s very clear - like a menu
Bit shouty - repeating BE makes it sound angry
Be
Single
BBW lover
Able to accom
Etc ... you sound fed up of poor Messages ( we are )
But relax it a bit
Nice pics btw"
Thank you, and yes youre right, i am, but feedback very much appreciated x |
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The previous comment was spot on. Your pics look lovely, sexy and smiley.
Profile text is a bit off putting and some of the items are not necessary. Assuming that most ppl will look at your pics first before reading the text, is there an need to say ‘bbw lover’? |
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By *inkySeeKinkyDo OP Woman
over a year ago
'tween PontyCarlo & CasVegas in West Yorks |
"The previous comment was spot on. Your pics look lovely, sexy and smiley.
Profile text is a bit off putting and some of the items are not necessary. Assuming that most ppl will look at your pics first before reading the text, is there an need to say ‘bbw lover’? "
Thank you, much appreciated x |
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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago
Northampton Somewhere |
I have often thought about using bullet points of likes and dislikes, purely to make it easier for the guys who cba to read a proper written bio.
I didn't because I think it's can be misconstrued at demanding, and moody moo!!! Maybe that's putting blokes off  |
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By *inkySeeKinkyDo OP Woman
over a year ago
'tween PontyCarlo & CasVegas in West Yorks |
"I have often thought about using bullet points of likes and dislikes, purely to make it easier for the guys who cba to read a proper written bio.
I didn't because I think it's can be misconstrued at demanding, and moody moo!!! Maybe that's putting blokes off "
Yeah ive had both and the bullet points yeild slightly better results than paragraphs...if someone isnt going to read a profile then in my experience it doesnt make a diff how its laid out x |
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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago
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"I have often thought about using bullet points of likes and dislikes, purely to make it easier for the guys who cba to read a proper written bio.
I didn't because I think it's can be misconstrued at demanding, and moody moo!!! Maybe that's putting blokes off
Yeah ive had both and the bullet points yeild slightly better results than paragraphs...if someone isnt going to read a profile then in my experience it doesnt make a diff how its laid out x"
Oh, interesting. I thought it would of had a negative affect. |
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By *inkySeeKinkyDo OP Woman
over a year ago
'tween PontyCarlo & CasVegas in West Yorks |
"I have often thought about using bullet points of likes and dislikes, purely to make it easier for the guys who cba to read a proper written bio.
I didn't because I think it's can be misconstrued at demanding, and moody moo!!! Maybe that's putting blokes off
Yeah ive had both and the bullet points yeild slightly better results than paragraphs...if someone isnt going to read a profile then in my experience it doesnt make a diff how its laid out x
Oh, interesting. I thought it would of had a negative affect. "
Lol as i said, slightly better. Thank you for the feedback though, i will take it on board x |
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"Any advice on our profile would be amazing "
Add some pictures of prince. Attend clubs and or socials and hopefully get some written verifications for people to read.
Expand on what types of sex you like or would like to have a go at trying. |
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"I have often thought about using bullet points of likes and dislikes, purely to make it easier for the guys who cba to read a proper written bio.
I didn't because I think it's can be misconstrued at demanding, and moody moo!!! Maybe that's putting blokes off
Yeah ive had both and the bullet points yeild slightly better results than paragraphs...if someone isnt going to read a profile then in my experience it doesnt make a diff how its laid out x"
I’ve tried many different profile styles. Can’t sort out who bothers to read vs. who doesn’t...but longer profiles seem to guarantee they won’t be read. You may wish for the ‘less is more’ approach, specify only your utter dealbreakers, and remove the text about the empty nest. Happy Fabbing! |
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"Feedback on profile please as I'm not getting any luck on here. Or is it just down to the fact that it's overloaded with guys?? "
First feedback: Don't hijack other people's threads. Make your own. |
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"Feedback on profile please as I'm not getting any luck on here. Or is it just down to the fact that it's overloaded with guys?? "
1) explain what types of sex you like and what types you would like to explore.
2) get some verifications either from socials or club nights.
3) say more about yourself
Good luck
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I wonder if it lacks 'the person', to me it reads a little bit like a rule book and doesn't hint at the character behind it... If I read a bit about a confident woman who knows what she likes etc Id get the same Impression but feel I was understanding the person a bit more x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Tbh pretty much the same that's already been said photos are incredible text reads like a list but also I wanna add that looking through the pics I had a huge boner hahaha ya gotta be doing something right x |
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