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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hiya, first impression would be that it'd be nice to have some more pics. There's a few typos in there and it kinda feels like you're attempting to reach a word count for an essay. I get what you're trying to convey to the reader but you could try wording differently xx |
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