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By *lceeWoman
over a year ago
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Ok - these are niggles so don’t take them personally. Trying not to let your utterly lickable abs dazzle me into not being honest with you *laughs*
1) your status says you are a Master looking for your sub, however your profile and username makes it clear you’re a switch. Are you looking for a sub? Or a switchy princess? Mixed messaging there which would confuse me.
2) uncapitalised ‘I’s. Don’t know why I found that annoying. Few typos in your first main paragraph (you have ‘and but’ - pick one, and the wrong tense of a couple of verbs). Again, not biggies, rather little niggles.
3) you say you love to dominate, that you’re a switch and you have the BDSM test in your profile...but you don’t list SM as one of your interests. You may very well be cutting out your target market...I certainly browse filtered by SM.
On the plus side, your photos are hot (that hoodie one - be still my beating heart  ) and you come across as a very genuine and fun guy.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Ok - these are niggles so don’t take them personally. Trying not to let your utterly lickable abs dazzle me into not being honest with you *laughs*
1) your status says you are a Master looking for your sub, however your profile and username makes it clear you’re a switch. Are you looking for a sub? Or a switchy princess? Mixed messaging there which would confuse me.
2) uncapitalised ‘I’s. Don’t know why I found that annoying. Few typos in your first main paragraph (you have ‘and but’ - pick one, and the wrong tense of a couple of verbs). Again, not biggies, rather little niggles.
3) you say you love to dominate, that you’re a switch and you have the BDSM test in your profile...but you don’t list SM as one of your interests. You may very well be cutting out your target market...I certainly browse filtered by SM.
On the plus side, your photos are hot (that hoodie one - be still my beating heart ) and you come across as a very genuine and fun guy.
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Why thank you!!
I shall make all amendments now. I hope I'll pass the test.. but I suppose I will let you be the judge of that  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Your renovations have been going on a long time. Are you able to live in the house ?"
Not as of yet...I'm only just putting a roof on haha! Such a long process!  |
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I think Elcee nailed it with any slight criticisms,if anything you could teach a few others on here the right photos to use and a well written and descriptive profile.
Typical you're straight and too far away  |
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By *os19Man
over a year ago
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You profile looks ok to me the only thing
I would add is if you are member of any adult clubs mention them or if you go to any non members adult clubs again mention them.Last week I reformatted my profile from one big paragraph to short sentences and asked advice the advice was it’s better with short sentences which you mostly have. |
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