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By *osweet69 OP   Couple  over a year ago

portsmouth

We think we may need to update our profile text and wonder now it is viewed by people in its present form? x

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By *naswingdressWoman  over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

The text itself is fine, but breaking it up into paragraphs will make it more readable.

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By *osweet69 OP   Couple  over a year ago

portsmouth


"The text itself is fine, but breaking it up into paragraphs will make it more readable. "
Thank you that makes sense we will do that.

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By *tirluvMan  over a year ago

the right frame of mind -London

It all sounds a bit stacato -read it out loud to yourselves to get a sense of the rhythm of the language used -vary your adjectives and put a bit of humour into it -if only for your sakes -single desperate guys will ignore whats written anyway

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By *osweet69 OP   Couple  over a year ago

portsmouth


"It all sounds a bit stacato -read it out loud to yourselves to get a sense of the rhythm of the language used -vary your adjectives and put a bit of humour into it -if only for your sakes -single desperate guys will ignore whats written anyway"
Interesting take on it and in all fairness to single fellas they do seen to take note and do not contact us.

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