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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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i’ve looked at a couple of these check my profile roast my profile etc
so please can i either improve on mine or be better presented
be brutal if necessary
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By *erby DomCouple
over a year ago
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I don't think it is a bad profile but it could do with some tweaks.
Watch your capitalisation of the first letter in a sentence as the grammar police will be on to you.
I would start with the "Easy going transgendered girl who goes out in the real world and occasionally likes to get up to some mischievous fun" as the profile reads a little negative with the first couple of lines and that may put people off.
The pics are nice, I think you did well, hopefully, you will get some other ideas from others on here too. ![](/icons/thumb_up.png) |
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