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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
To be brutally honest one half reads very much like a dating ad and the other half is all about what *you* want and not what you think you can offer.
Pics, while not the worst, could be better too.
People aren't interested in your daily regime they want to know about you the person and make a judgement call as to whether they think there'll be a connection.
That all said it's obvious that some thought and effort has gone into it, which is more than could be said for a lot of profiles on here  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Got bored after the first 2 sentences and didn't go any further. Nothing there to grab my attention. And seen as you have no profile pic, I'd never have visited your profile in the first place  "
okay thanks for the advice I'll have another go |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"To be brutally honest one half reads very much like a dating ad and the other half is all about what *you* want and not what you think you can offer.
Pics, while not the worst, could be better too.
People aren't interested in your daily regime they want to know about you the person and make a judgement call as to whether they think there'll be a connection.
That all said it's obvious that some thought and effort has gone into it, which is more than could be said for a lot of profiles on here "
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The pictures are okay but the text is really offputting.
First up, put it in paragraphs, that's not easy to read.
If I came across your profile outside of this thread I'd have stopped reading fast, the bit about your hours and what you do after work is dull. If you're saying you're only free to meet at weekends just say that.
You talk a bit about what you want but there's nothing to address why I might want to meet you and what I might get out of it.
Oh and it comes over as negative about your ex, that's just unnecessary and not very attractive. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You need paragraphs because its a little hard to read at times.
People will say shouldn’t have a cock pic but for me (mrs) I wouldn’t bother with a profile without any. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi I just wanted to know if my profile is approachable, I have put a lot of work in to it and would appreciate the feed back"
i dont need to read your daily plan.
i want to see what you like and dislike as it helps me decide whenever to reply to a message.
your profile would mean a delete from my inbox |
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Stopped reading after 'I work full time'. Sorry it's just dull.
Ditch the daily diary and the info re the ex, just put when you are free and when and why you're not, what you're looking for and most importantly what you can offer X |
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