Hi again people i have posted about my profile recently and would like feedback on it now and thank you for the advice the first time.
Ive tryed my best to use the advice i was given to create a better profile. |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
To be honest OP - I'm not sure what your profile read like before but I'm not sure you've improved it a great deal.
For starters you don't appear to have listened to the advice about pics - what you have aren't exactly enticing - try using the timer on your phone camera to take a few body shots that show you off - doesn't have to be naked or anything but something that teases and gives people an idea of your body - what you have currently are mostly a mix of bad selfies and holiday snaps. Fine for Facebook but no so much here.
Moving onto your profile text - it's again not overly enticing - "single and ready to mingle" is a tad cheesy for starters!!
Great that you have experience of threesomes and one night stands I assume from nights out locally - there's a world of difference between going out on the town and swinging though.
Not sure what social drinking and your kinky side have to do with each other but is nothing really too far? So if a woman wanted to poo on you (to take an extreme) that would be ok? What about if she wanted to make you bleed or introduce another guy to play with you while she watched? Everyone has something that is "too far" so be careful what you are saying.
"As long as they are chill" - what exactly does that mean
It all reads though as what you want and not what you think you can offer - you need to get some personality across and stand out from the crowd - entice people in - at the moment it's all very generic and actually quite immature - so you need to find a way to get away from that |
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