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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
Staffordshire Moorlands |
Oh dear, sorry, but it’s hard to know where to start!
Spelling is horrendous! What is “doming” and “god stamina”??
Your details say you are 5 foot 6 but in the text you claim to be 6 foot!
The pics are just of a woman, we don’t want to see where you’ve been.
And that status....well....just YUCK!
Sorry but you did ask! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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its all a bit garbled, hard to read...and a bit confusing..you say you like meeting hot wives and couples, but at the beginning say youre not experienced with swinging.. |
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It reads like you’re trying to say what you think people want to hear. Just be yourself. That way you will be unique as will your profile be and so you’ll stand out amongst all the other boring, bland and bleurgh profiles. |
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By *entenTeaCouple
over a year ago
Buckley North Wales |
Well you have made the effort to write more than many people do. Which is a good start.
I think you need to make the key points more concise and easily identifiable.
You also need to order your thoughts a bit and not contradict your self.
Some pictures of your bod or in casual attire would help. I agree with the other commenters you are trying to say what you think people want to see, that is damaging the real message.
Ultimately your profile is best as a contact point for people you have met, especially at clubs. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"And believe it or not, you still like to give oral sex!!!! Shock! Horror! What is the world coming to? Do you really think it is so unusual that you give oral sex?? "
That so made me giggle |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"You like it when "she can still talk shit back" and "when she can show you new shit".
Not the most enticing way to word it. "
This
Also, you have a face picture of a girl and you’re not a couple. To me that’s disrespectful; blur her face or something! |
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"You like it when "she can still talk shit back" and "when she can show you new shit".
Not the most enticing way to word it.
This
Also, you have a face picture of a girl and you’re not a couple. To me that’s disrespectful; blur her face or something! "
Yet another mod fail. |
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