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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Done a million times, and I know my pics are pretty crap, but advise on actual written content please

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By *izzy.Woman over a year ago

Stoke area

Pretty decent profile. Explains your situation. Liked the mention of pub for a drink...social.

Only bit I wasn't keen on is the " don't want to shag the whole site" I think the comment is overused and unnecessary.

But think it's ok

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By *allySlinkyWoman over a year ago

Leeds

I agree with Lizzy. Also "if you want to know more just ask" is a cliché and a bit pointless.

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By *loswingersCouple over a year ago

Gloucester

"Pretty decent profile. Explains your situation. Liked the mention of pub for a drink...social.

Only bit I wasn't keen on is the " don't want to shag the whole site" I think the comment is overused and unnecessary.

But think it's ok

Yeah , the bit about not wanting to shag all the girls is a bugbear of ours too .

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Done a million times, and I know my pics are pretty crap, but advise on actual written content please"

If your happy with it then great... be yourself and people well like that

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Taken on board and adjusted

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By *allySlinkyWoman over a year ago

Leeds

Looking much better.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Honest, straight forward, no stupid claims about anything. Looks ok to me, good luck fella

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By *izzy.Woman over a year ago

Stoke area

That's better. Good that you reacted on people's thpughts so quick

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

The text is really great. I can't see how it can be improved. But the most important part of the profile is pictures.

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By *ad-GirlWoman over a year ago

Huddersfield

"Done a million times, and I know my pics are pretty crap, but advise on actual written content please"

Its a bit can't than can in its context and dosn't make you want to meet once red if you want honesty.

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By *londieddWoman over a year ago

fife

pics are awful 2 of a necklace 1 cock shot, you have tidied up your text so new pics and it should be much improved, I'm not a fan of the been here before so know the ropes statement but that's just me

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By *allySlinkyWoman over a year ago

Leeds

"I'm not a fan of the been here before so know the ropes statement but that's just me"

If people say that have been here before and know the ropes, I always wonder why they need to ask for advice.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"I'm not a fan of the been here before so know the ropes statement but that's just me

If people say that have been here before and know the ropes, I always wonder why they need to ask for advice. "
originally was here as a single, years ago, then as a couple, which I left my partner to do, now back as a single after splitting

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