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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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I’ll keep it short and sweet:
Ladies and couples, check my profile out and let me know what you think and if you think any improvements can be made..
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By *lceeWoman
over a year ago
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Little bit overly squirt heavy. Some women may like it but for those of us who rolls their eyes at it (as it doesn’t really feel like anything special) it would put me off.
Could use some photos...arty shots of torso or bum if you can’t show your face.
There’s no real personality there...put some thought into your target market and how you would chat them up in a bar. Would you tell them that you want to make them squirt or a few things about yourself? Maybe try and make them laugh? Personalise it - it’s your shop window and at the moment it’s a little bare.
And have some fun with it! This site is supposed to be fun - it’s all a game and you want to show that you enjoy playing it  |
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By *ransGuyTV/TS
over a year ago
Cardiff |
Your main selling points are that you can make a few women squirt, something that is off putting for many women, and you're 420 friendly, something else that's off putting for many.
Add on top no public photos. Many will delete messages unread if there aren't any and/or the avatar has been left as a shadow.
You're limiting your appeal I'm afraid. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks a lot guys, I’ve updated it slightly, please let me know what you think. I don’t feel comfortable adding a face pic to the avatar and anything else is pointless in my opinion with it being so small.
Let me know what you think of the updated profile text though.  |
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By *sGivesWoodWoman
over a year ago
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"Thanks a lot guys, I’ve updated it slightly, please let me know what you think. I don’t feel comfortable adding a face pic to the avatar and anything else is pointless in my opinion with it being so small.
Let me know what you think of the updated profile text though. "
Text looks better but still too much about 420. Again some pics and an avatar will help you. Good luck x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You repeat that you'd attach face and body pic twice. Also, it's 'if you want to KNOW more', not 'now'- I know they sound the same but they mean something totally different, and are not even the same part of speech.
I agree that there is still too much re 420, but I don't do any sort of drugs so I guess I'm biased.
Happy fabbing |
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By *ransGuyTV/TS
over a year ago
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"Thanks a lot guys, I’ve updated it slightly, please let me know what you think. I don’t feel comfortable adding a face pic to the avatar and anything else is pointless in my opinion with it being so small.
Let me know what you think of the updated profile text though. "
You don't have to add a face pic, you have your whole body to work with. You're on a site trying to attract women, you need more than text to do that, especially when your competitors are using all the site's tools to "sell" themselves, which include photos showing what they look like, what they have to offer. And they aren't small photos, they can be viewed in your "gallery" as larger. Your avatar is the appetiser encouraging women to actually want to bother looking further. Even just a decent body shot would do. You say you have some meat on you, which can mean anything from muscular, rugby build, fat etc...
Your text is better, I'm still not sure advertising that you're into illegal drugs is helping but oh well, it's better than it was. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Thanks a lot guys, I’ve updated it slightly, please let me know what you think. I don’t feel comfortable adding a face pic to the avatar and anything else is pointless in my opinion with it being so small.
Let me know what you think of the updated profile text though. "
Totally disagree. Choice of profile pic is the most important part of you profile I think, it's the first thing people see. |
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By *ransGuyTV/TS
over a year ago
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"Thanks a lot guys, I’ve updated it slightly, please let me know what you think. I don’t feel comfortable adding a face pic to the avatar and anything else is pointless in my opinion with it being so small.
Let me know what you think of the updated profile text though.
Totally disagree. Choice of profile pic is the most important part of you profile I think, it's the first thing people see."
Exactly. For example I can clearly see that you have the body type that turns me on. So that's one box ticked before I've even looked at your profile or, if you had sent me one, message. So we're already starting on a positive which means I would make the effort to look at your profile/message.
So, if I was a woman it's not pointless at all... |
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I agree with what everyone says re 420. I never understand why people put that on, it seems to me it's going to put off far more people then it will attract. . Most of us on here are not in first flush of youth on here and will translate "420 friendly" as "pathetic stoner" rather than "attractive chilled guy".
In fact, I feel a survey coming on.... |
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By *ransGuyTV/TS
over a year ago
Cardiff |
Another point in the 420 business. You say you use it for medical purposes. Most people who say that either mean for pain or psychological issues. Without knowing what medical purposes means that imaginations will run wild... and put people off even more.
I'm not saying you have to put why you use an illegal drug, just that it's really not helping that you do.
If, like you say in your profile, nobody would know you smoke it unless you tell them then why say anything... unless you are looking to either buy or sell...?
I'm not saying you are, just trying to encourage you to read what you've put in the mindset of the people you are trying to attract. Are you trying to attract other drug users or not? If it's a not really then remove the drug reference. |
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