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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

As above I thought I would have a little bit of fun with my profile text and what happens.

Would appreciate any feedback the community has though as this is a new approach for me and not sure if I come across as a fun guy that doesnt take things too seriously or as a bit of a twat lmao

Be honest but please be kind lol

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"As above I thought I would have a little bit of fun with my profile text and what happens.

Would appreciate any feedback the community has though as this is a new approach for me and not sure if I come across as a fun guy that doesnt take things too seriously or as a bit of a twat lmao

Be honest but please be kind lol "

Sorry too long

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By *londieddWoman  over a year ago

fife

gave up after 2 paragraphs and the misspelling of guaranteed

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By *allySlinkyWoman  over a year ago

Leeds

Are you really 4'8"?

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Not a great start

Spelling I know needs attention I have big hands and a small mobile. I will correct when I get home.

Not sure what happened with the height lol. I am arround 5'9

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

It's cute but definitely put spell check on it.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"It's cute but definitely put spell check on it."

Has now been spell checked and thank you for the first positive comment

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By *ieman300Man  over a year ago

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Yeah spelling off in a few places. Other than that I liked it. It might work for you. Hope so as it is a bit diferent. Good luck.

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By *ieman300Man  over a year ago

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You need to check manualy. You have body instead of body's. Spell check won't flag that. Possibly some more.

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By *ieman300Man  over a year ago

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And punctuation is off. Sorry to be a pain. But you want it right

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By *uxom redCouple  over a year ago

Shrewsbury

It's funny but too long

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"And punctuation is off. Sorry to be a pain. But you want it right "

I will put it through a grammar checker this afternoon.

All advice appreciated

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"It's funny but too long "

Any recommendations on what i should cut out?

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By *r C Miss CCouple  over a year ago

llanelli

Lol i enjoyed reading it. Hope it works for you.

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By *layfullsamMan  over a year ago

Solihull

I'd leave it as it is and see what happens.

What's to long for some will be to short for others, what's funny to some will annoy others etc etc

I changed mine and to be honest I don't think it's made any difference at all despite them being completely different.

The one thing that seems to matter most is good photos(I need to add some to mine)

Good luck

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

In think it's funny, hope you get the intended results!

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Thank you to last 3 posters for the positive comment's.

Photo's are next on my next agenda as I am not keen on my current profile pic.

Is it worth maybe considering a semi professional photographer tp do some profile pics or do you generally prefer a more amateur photo?

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By *emini ManMan  over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

People with either like it or not OP - personally I think it's a novel and humorous approach and hope it works for you If there's a criticism it's maybe a little too flowery in places and would benefit from a spell/Capital letter check.

As for pics - you can achieve some good results with your phone camera and a timer setting without the need to visit a photographer. Either way you would definitely benefit from some better ones than the current.

Good luck

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"People with either like it or not OP - personally I think it's a novel and humorous approach and hope it works for you If there's a criticism it's maybe a little too flowery in places and would benefit from a spell/Capital letter check.

As for pics - you can achieve some good results with your phone camera and a timer setting without the need to visit a photographer. Either way you would definitely benefit from some better ones than the current.

Good luck "

Thanks for the input

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By *litterbabeWoman  over a year ago

hiding from cock pics.

I think its fun. A little different and its good to stand out from the many uninteresting profiles.

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By *reenleavesCouple  over a year ago

North Wales

It's a novel approach for sure The problem with 'selling' yourself as a wonder product is that we're all so used to false advertising and exaggerated claims

So it may work against you or it may be a winner. Fix up the English and improve the pics and you'll certainly have a memorable profile one way or the other!

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By *reenleavesCouple  over a year ago

North Wales

Also, as a single guy, you may not want to have what appears to be a wedding photo in the background of your profile pic

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Also, as a single guy, you may not want to have what appears to be a wedding photo in the background of your profile pic "

Thanks for the kind comments and af far as false advertising goes I can always hide the negative veris

I am married and we also have a joint profile tea_coffee. We swing together of course and she is aware of my single profile so there risk of drama grom us

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Meant to say there is no risk of drama from us.

I actually consider myself very lucky to have such an amazing woman behind me.

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By *reenleavesCouple  over a year ago

North Wales


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I am married and we also have a joint profile tea_coffee. We swing together of course and she is aware of my single profile so there risk of drama grom us "

That's great then Just it's not clear in your profile which would probably put people off if they thought you were playing away. It may be worth linking to your couples profile from your single one.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"I think its fun. A little different and its good to stand out from the many uninteresting profiles. "

Thanks and wow I love your photo's

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


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I am married and we also have a joint profile tea_coffee. We swing together of course and she is aware of my single profile so there risk of drama grom us

That's great then Just it's not clear in your profile which would probably put people off if they thought you were playing away. It may be worth linking to your couples profile from your single one."

Done

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By *allySlinkyWoman  over a year ago

Leeds

Couldn't your wife take some pics of you for your single profile?

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Couldn't your wife take some pics of you for your single profile? "

She has taken all my pics on here and does a good job considering what she has to work with

I was thinking that due to the extra competition for men playing alone on here, would a semi professionalset of photos increase my chances of standing out?

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By *allySlinkyWoman  over a year ago

Leeds

Why don't you make more of them public so we can judge her photographic abilities ( and your photogenic features)

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Hahahahaha, I like it. Definitely made me laugh. More pics though.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Pmsl I am not sure I have alot of photogenic abilities, I guess that's one reason I thinking of a semi professional who may know how to handle the light and ect ect to best show of my um features

It also sounds like a fun thing to do as a couple so was going to see if the wife was interested in joining me.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Hahahahaha, I like it. Definitely made me laugh. More pics though. "

After reading your profile your situation sounds very similar to our own.

Thanks for the positive comments

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

On your couples profile you describe yourself as large, on this profile athletic. Might want to decide which it is

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By *litterbabeWoman  over a year ago

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"I think its fun. A little different and its good to stand out from the many uninteresting profiles.

Thanks and wow I love your photo's "

Thank you x

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"On your couples profile you describe yourself as large, on this profile athletic. Might want to decide which it is "

Eek cant get anything past you lol

Its like being fab straight lol only I am fab athletic

Updated x

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