"It seems fine to me. While I don't share your sense of humour I think it shows your personality.
Good luck"
Thank you. Not really sure it captures my sense of humour tbh. My gf says the rope line is a bit weird! |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
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I like it OP it doesn't take itself too seriously and conveys your personality nicely which is always a good thing.
The only thing I'd consider changing is the 'Ideally I want a FWB" line...using the word "want" makes it more about what you "want" than what may be a mutually agreeable thing. Perhaps change it to "Ideally I'd like to meet a..." which just reads better.
Maybe add some more about what you think you can offer and the type of person you're looking for?
Perhaps a few more body/torso pics too?
Those last two aren't totally necessary but would be good enhancements to what you already have  |
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"I like it OP it doesn't take itself too seriously and conveys your personality nicely which is always a good thing.
The only thing I'd consider changing is the 'Ideally I want a FWB" line...using the word "want" makes it more about what you "want" than what may be a mutually agreeable thing. Perhaps change it to "Ideally I'd like to meet a..." which just reads better.
Maybe add some more about what you think you can offer and the type of person you're looking for?
Perhaps a few more body/torso pics too?
Those last two aren't totally necessary but would be good enhancements to what you already have "
Good advice - thank you!
I'll re-word it a bit. As to what I can offer - I not really sure how to sound like I do have something to offer without sounding a bit full of myself.
As to the pictures, as soon as I can think of something tasteful, I'll add them. |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
"I like it OP it doesn't take itself too seriously and conveys your personality nicely which is always a good thing.
The only thing I'd consider changing is the 'Ideally I want a FWB" line...using the word "want" makes it more about what you "want" than what may be a mutually agreeable thing. Perhaps change it to "Ideally I'd like to meet a..." which just reads better.
Maybe add some more about what you think you can offer and the type of person you're looking for?
Perhaps a few more body/torso pics too?
Those last two aren't totally necessary but would be good enhancements to what you already have
Good advice - thank you!
I'll re-word it a bit. As to what I can offer - I not really sure how to sound like I do have something to offer without sounding a bit full of myself.
As to the pictures, as soon as I can think of something tasteful, I'll add them."
No problem and you can get across what you think you can offer without coming across as full of yourself just provide some high level details about the kind of things you enjoy - doesn't have to be of the "I can shag you within an inch of your life" variety
Take a look at other guys pics (not the cock ones ) for ideas of what might work  |
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