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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Good afternoon all. After a short break I have decided to give my profile a bit of a spring clean!

Is there any major issues with it that anyone can see?

Any advice / pointers?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Mate.. nobody has said anything so I'll try and help.

- Less is sometimes more in both text and imagery.

You can write well.. so try writing a little creatively.

I'd focus your profile on attracting women. On the whole they are far less superficial than us.. on the whole.. they prefer to have their minds tickled a little.

Think about what someone who needs mental stimulation would want to read and look at.. tease.

But let your actual personality out. don't try to be something you really aren't.. just for a woman's attention.

Best advice I can give you is get a good profile pic and get on the forum... watch, learn.. contribute.

Also get rid of your knob shots.. send them all to friends only.. even if your packing heat.. it'll be a much nicer surprise when it's eventually asked for.

win over the women gradually.. and the couples will fall in behind.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Mate.. nobody has said anything so I'll try and help.

- Less is sometimes more in both text and imagery.

You can write well.. so try writing a little creatively.

I'd focus your profile on attracting women. On the whole they are far less superficial than us.. on the whole.. they prefer to have their minds tickled a little.

Think about what someone who needs mental stimulation would want to read and look at.. tease.

But let your actual personality out. don't try to be something you really aren't.. just for a woman's attention.

Best advice I can give you is get a good profile pic and get on the forum... watch, learn.. contribute.

Also get rid of your knob shots.. send them all to friends only.. even if your packing heat.. it'll be a much nicer surprise when it's eventually asked for.

win over the women gradually.. and the couples will fall in behind."

Not a bad first attempt if I'm honest.. better than any of my tries in first few months.

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By *alandNitaCouple  over a year ago

Scunthorpe

Overall not too bad.

However, there is a spelling mistake and the "who doesn't" bits come across as a bit juvenile to me (sorry).

I'd also lose the photo that is mostly of the woman and have a greater variety of you.

Nita

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Cheers!

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Made a few edits.

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By *unforus1965Couple  over a year ago

MIDLANDS


"Good afternoon all. After a short break I have decided to give my profile a bit of a spring clean!

Is there any major issues with it that anyone can see?

Any advice / pointers?"

We have a question for you

You know some guys who need a map to find a clit, or are you saying that to make yourself look good?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Good afternoon all. After a short break I have decided to give my profile a bit of a spring clean!

Is there any major issues with it that anyone can see?

Any advice / pointers?

We have a question for you

You know some guys who need a map to find a clit, or are you saying that to make yourself look good?"

For it's mistakes.. it's better than the last one.. just keep taking on critique.. even if it's brutal.. take it on the chin.. crack on.

Fuck it.. all this advice.. I'll put my own up for review now.. get torn to shreds and look like a twat Here goes

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Good afternoon all. After a short break I have decided to give my profile a bit of a spring clean!

Is there any major issues with it that anyone can see?

Any advice / pointers?

We have a question for you

You know some guys who need a map to find a clit, or are you saying that to make yourself look good?"

Well I know women who have been with guys who have needed one

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By *unforus1965Couple  over a year ago

MIDLANDS


"Good afternoon all. After a short break I have decided to give my profile a bit of a spring clean!

Is there any major issues with it that anyone can see?

Any advice / pointers?

We have a question for you

You know some guys who need a map to find a clit, or are you saying that to make yourself look good?

Well I know women who have been with guys who have needed one"

Right.....

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

You look better with body hair

Didn't really read the words

Sorry for not being helpful

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By *iSubSlutWoman  over a year ago

Bedford

I'd lose some of the exclamation marks, it makes it more difficult to read.

I'd lose the fem pic....

Nothing major, nice profile...

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

can someone help me pls. It says i am Female when it should sate i am couple

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"can someone help me pls. It says i am Female when it should sate i am couple"

Change it in profile settings.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

What I see, seems fine too me....

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