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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi people I am new to this thought give it a try after a friend recommend the site to me if you can look at my profile and see how I can improve it will be very helpful thank you in advance.  |
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Hi and welcome.
Your profile text is terrible I'm afraid, I would suggest starting over again.
It is almost impossible to read, I did try but gave up after the first few lines.
Break the text up a little so it actually makes sense and use some punctuation. At the moment it is just one massive sentence that doesn't flow at all.
Give it another go OP and good luck |
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