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over a year ago
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"Any suggestions in improving my profile text.
I understand that pics may help. Concentrating on profile text for now.
Thanks in advance"
Sex pest and 420 friendly will put many off! |
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"Any suggestions in improving my profile text.
I understand that pics may help. Concentrating on profile text for now.
Thanks in advance
Sex pest and 420 friendly will put many off!"
I thought it was funny!
anything to add? |
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Where's Oxforx? Sex pest is a turn off as is 420.
No avatar = instant delete. There are literally thousands of single men on site all looking for the same thing. You need to stand out from the crowd. Good luck. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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Keeping your pics private won't help you get meets.
Huge amount of people on here with a few viewable pics,so personally speaking your profile would go to the back of the queue.
As it's a sex site people generally like to see a little of who they might be meeting. |
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"So now he's taken advice and removed the 420 reference. That's not helpful. "
Maybe people who look at his profile with the idea of considering him as a potential sexual partner will use the green arrow and see this thread wherein he purports to be not unameniable to recreational drug taking under the ruse of "420 friendly". |
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"I forgot to ask about the private rate... where's the raised eyebrow emoji...?
You might have to add me as a friend for an honest assessment. The corset is a solid 8/10 though ??"
Nah. Private gallery is reserved for those I've met and I'm very 420 unfriendly... |
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"I forgot to ask about the private rate... where's the raised eyebrow emoji...?
You might have to add me as a friend for an honest assessment. The corset is a solid 8/10 though ??
Nah. Private gallery is reserved for those I've met and I'm very 420 unfriendly..."
That's just great. Enjoy the rest of your evening ?? |
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"Your profile is all about you, it says 'come and get me'.
But it doesn't work like that on here 
Well i'm glad it does something. Can you enlighten me?
Do a forum search for Profile
Advice "
hahhaha always enjoy a bit of humour to end the night. May call it a night on that note, early start the morra |
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"So now he's taken advice and removed the 420 reference. That's not helpful.
Maybe people who look at his profile with the idea of considering him as a potential sexual partner will use the green arrow and see this thread wherein he purports to be not unameniable to recreational drug taking under the ruse of "420 friendly". "
So there is a feature now on profiles that link directly to their forum posts? |
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"It's all about what you want and not what you can offer.
How so?
Should i re-word certain things or add completely new info"
Just read it, as though you were someone else. Why would they pick you over the hundreds of other single guys? As the poster above says, it's just about what you want, not what you can offer.
It can't be written for you, you have to understand the comments and act on them in a way that reflect you.
I know you want profile text advice, but you can have the best written profile on Fab, but without pics you will get no answers. After 7 months, on-ste, there's no excuse for not having any. |
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Hi, thanks for your help before. I've tried to take on board what was said and i'm feeling happier about it all already. Though the strike rate is still 0%. Yes,still not off the mark haha.
Please can you suggest any further amendments that you feel might help.
Thanks in advance |
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"Hi, thanks for your help before. I've tried to take on board what was said and i'm feeling happier about it all already. Though the strike rate is still 0%. Yes,still not off the mark haha.
Please can you suggest any further amendments that you feel might help.
Thanks in advance"
Do you send pictures out with first messages? |
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"Hi, thanks for your help before. I've tried to take on board what was said and i'm feeling happier about it all already. Though the strike rate is still 0%. Yes,still not off the mark haha.
Please can you suggest any further amendments that you feel might help.
Thanks in advance
Do you send pictures out with first messages?"
I do, face pics only though. I'd appreciate it if you don't lay all the blame on my face  |
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"Hi, thanks for your help before. I've tried to take on board what was said and i'm feeling happier about it all already. Though the strike rate is still 0%. Yes,still not off the mark haha.
Please can you suggest any further amendments that you feel might help.
Thanks in advance
Do you send pictures out with first messages?
I do, face pics only though. I'd appreciate it if you don't lay all the blame on my face "
Your blurb is fine but you need a few nice body shots. The one picture you have there is pointless. |
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