So, I think I might have gotten a bit wordy. And some people seem to have taken the things I'd like to try as the things I'm looking for, so might have to change that. Thought by putting out likes and dislikes and then future maybes would help but now I'm not so sure.
I know I only have a few pictures but I like to keep face pics back for message exchanges and the rest of a touch more nude.
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Dude....dont know where to start! Firstly im straight so dont get excited...but i had a peek at your profile....
Key points from me..
1. Lose the oats sentance..or you will lose the reader on the first line.
2. Try and be more positive...seems a lot of negative parts in it?
3. Shorten it down maybe?
4. Highlight a few kinks or ideas you would like to try but dont explain everything.
Now I'm no expert but as a start....it will help i reckon...good luck...you seem like a nice guy... I'm sure you will find the person youre looking for  |
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It's too long (har-har) and full of needless explanations. Lose any negativity. Say an interesting thing about you or what you do (non sexual) - get better photos. You've got long hair, Samson, show it off. |
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Change your profile pic, when it is a small thumbnail it actually looks as though you have a bit of a belly on you with the blur, if I hadn't opened your profile I wouldn't have realised you were a slim guy, the pic doesn't encourage the reader inside so to speak. |
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"So, I think I might have gotten a bit wordy. And some people seem to have taken the things I'd like to try as the things I'm looking for, so might have to change that. Thought by putting out likes and dislikes and then future maybes would help but now I'm not so sure.
I know I only have a few pictures but I like to keep face pics back for message exchanges and the rest of a touch more nude.
Thanks for taking your time!"
Not too long but the pics are bland |
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I like the read - came over as clever and witty. Maybe a tweak long due to explanations. If you were my type, then I'd really enjoy reading it.
I agree about the profile pic. You look middle aged man with gut but I was then surprised by your pics - albeit a tad bland as said above.
At the bottom of my profile Ive put some profile / tips in case it helps anyone x |
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"Dude....dont know where to start! Firstly im straight so dont get excited...but i had a peek at your profile....
Key points from me..
1. Lose the oats sentance..or you will lose the reader on the first line.
2. Try and be more positive...seems a lot of negative parts in it?
3. Shorten it down maybe?
4. Highlight a few kinks or ideas you would like to try but dont explain everything.
Now I'm no expert but as a start....it will help i reckon...good luck...you seem like a nice guy... I'm sure you will find the person youre looking for "
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my face pics etc are under friends.