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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hi...pics are ok...little niggle of the toilet roll tube in the photos but I'm just an old woman that notices stuff like that. Amazing how many pics are taken in bathrooms.
Your text is ok...little spelling errors and punctuation errors. The body of the text is rather 'standard' and doesn't reveal much about YOU - you're so young ...so you might have to convince ladies of your experience and social confidence. You state the usual stock phrases seen over and over on fab.
Good luck...a few minutes tweaking that will improve it.
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