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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hello fellow swinger comrades!
I put some effort into making a decent profile, but it can be challenging to see from the perspective of a lady or couple.
http://www.fabswingers.com/profile/adarkhorse
Please tell us what you'd change, and also what photo you'd prefer to be used as the avatar. If folk consistently feel that something needs alteration I'm happy to do so.
So;
A: What would you change?
B: What would you add/subtract from it?
TIA! 
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hello fellow swinger comrades!
I put some effort into making a decent profile, but it can be challenging to see from the perspective of a lady or couple.
http://www.fabswingers.com/profile/adarkhorse
Please tell us what you'd change, and also what photo you'd prefer to be used as the avatar. If folk consistently feel that something needs alteration I'm happy to do so.
So;
A: What would you change?
B: What would you add/subtract from it?
TIA!
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Try by renaming the post CRITIQUE .... spelling always works well when checked |
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"Hello fellow swinger comrades!
I put some effort into making a decent profile, but it can be challenging to see from the perspective of a lady or couple.
http://www.fabswingers.com/profile/adarkhorse
Please tell us what you'd change, and also what photo you'd prefer to be used as the avatar. If folk consistently feel that something needs alteration I'm happy to do so.
So;
A: What would you change?
B: What would you add/subtract from it?
TIA!
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well tbh i found the FAQ a bit laborious but i am not what your looking for so what do i know ,i think i am getting impatient with long profiles now and i know mines crap ,another reason to ignore this post |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"i looked but cant be bothered giving any advice lol"
Ah, dearest raisealaugh my friend, I hope I didn't hurt your feelings when I abused the notion of cock pictures |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"i looked but cant be bothered giving any advice lol
Ah, dearest raisealaugh my friend, I hope I didn't hurt your feelings when I abused the notion of cock pictures"
hhahahahaha am hardly likely to be offended lol..I know what works for me adark lol-will admit the QandA part sucks a bit -there thats all yer gettin |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm confused OP, some of the questions and answers don't match up to me.... could just be because it's 2am and I've been up for 20 hours though.  "
up with her vibrator for 20hrs i bet |
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"I'm confused OP, some of the questions and answers don't match up to me.... could just be because it's 2am and I've been up for 20 hours though. "
laine ,would he pull on the back of it thats all he wants to know , |
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"i looked but cant be bothered giving any advice lol
Ah, dearest raisealaugh my friend, I hope I didn't hurt your feelings when I abused the notion of cock pictures
hhahahahaha am hardly likely to be offended lol..I know what works for me adark lol-will admit the QandA part sucks a bit -there thats all yer gettin"
you just copied me lol , |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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@lutonmale and @_ushroom7
LOL, yeah I know now. Trouble is that I cannot re-edit posts and especially not thread titles.
Normally I spell correctly, but my mozilla firefox spell-check add-on doesn't seem to monitor for input html tags, only textarea tags such as the ones we our messages in. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"i looked but cant be bothered giving any advice lol
Ah, dearest raisealaugh my friend, I hope I didn't hurt your feelings when I abused the notion of cock pictures
hhahahahaha am hardly likely to be offended lol..I know what works for me adark lol-will admit the QandA part sucks a bit -there thats all yer gettin
you just copied me lol ,"
_leasuredome u said labourious blahhblahhh I just took the laymans terms and said it sucked...please read a dictionary for what it means to copy something lol |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I'm confused OP, some of the questions and answers don't match up to me.... could just be because it's 2am and I've been up for 20 hours though. "
aha! which ones? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm confused OP, some of the questions and answers don't match up to me.... could just be because it's 2am and I've been up for 20 hours though.
aha! which ones? "
Discretion = Hotel & fantasy = anonymity. |
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"i looked but cant be bothered giving any advice lol
Ah, dearest raisealaugh my friend, I hope I didn't hurt your feelings when I abused the notion of cock pictures
hhahahahaha am hardly likely to be offended lol..I know what works for me adark lol-will admit the QandA part sucks a bit -there thats all yer gettin
you just copied me lol ,
_leasuredome u said labourious blahhblahhh I just took the laymans terms and said it sucked...please read a dictionary for what it means to copy something lol"
nahhhhh cant be bothered |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"i looked but cant be bothered giving any advice lol
Ah, dearest raisealaugh my friend, I hope I didn't hurt your feelings when I abused the notion of cock pictures
hhahahahaha am hardly likely to be offended lol..I know what works for me adark lol-will admit the QandA part sucks a bit -there thats all yer gettin
you just copied me lol ,
_leasuredome u said labourious blahhblahhh I just took the laymans terms and said it sucked...please read a dictionary for what it means to copy something lol
nahhhhh cant be bothered "
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"I'm confused OP, some of the questions and answers don't match up to me.... could just be because it's 2am and I've been up for 20 hours though.
aha! which ones?
Discretion = Hotel & fantasy = anonymity. "
how come your still up chuck |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm confused OP, some of the questions and answers don't match up to me.... could just be because it's 2am and I've been up for 20 hours though.
aha! which ones?
Discretion = Hotel & fantasy = anonymity.
how come your still up chuck"
sleep so far has eluded me... no matter it is now the longest day so that explains it.  |
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"I'm confused OP, some of the questions and answers don't match up to me.... could just be because it's 2am and I've been up for 20 hours though.
aha! which ones?
Discretion = Hotel & fantasy = anonymity.
how come your still up chuck
sleep so far has eluded me... no matter it is now the longest day so that explains it. "
you should have a mug of hot milk and turn opn the news that will do it |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Firstly, "discrete" means individual or separate. I suspect you meant "discreet", which means careful about privacy.
The FAQ is different and more interesting than a block of text, but I think a lot of what you've included in it is unnecessary.
Q1: Nobody is going to say they are not genuine, so this is redundant.
Q2: As already mentioned, I don't see the connection between being discreet and sharing the cost of a hotel. I'd just add, "can accommodate but also willing to share the cost of a hotel", to your main profile text.
Q3: Fair enough, though "3sum" rather than "threesome" makes me cringe.
Q4: You've already said you're straight. If they ignored that, they'll probably ignore this too.
Q5: You've already said you always practice safe sex.
Q6: This Q&A seems a bit pointless.
Q7: I'd take this out and just add "always shaven" to an appropriate bit of the profile text.
Q8: This made me laugh!
Q9: Fair enough.
The interests section is good. The photos are good.
Above average, overall and I can't see any reason it shouldn't be successful. |
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"Firstly, "discrete" means individual or separate. I suspect you meant "discreet", which means careful about privacy.
The FAQ is different and more interesting than a block of text, but I think a lot of what you've included in it is unnecessary.
Q1: Nobody is going to say they are not genuine, so this is redundant.
Q2: As already mentioned, I don't see the connection between being discreet and sharing the cost of a hotel. I'd just add, "can accommodate but also willing to share the cost of a hotel", to your main profile text.
Q3: Fair enough, though "3sum" rather than "threesome" makes me cringe.
Q4: You've already said you're straight. If they ignored that, they'll probably ignore this too.
Q5: You've already said you always practice safe sex.
Q6: This Q&A seems a bit pointless.
Q7: I'd take this out and just add "always shaven" to an appropriate bit of the profile text.
Q8: This made me laugh!
Q9: Fair enough.
The interests section is good. The photos are good.
Above average, overall and I can't see any reason it shouldn't be successful."
now thats what you call feedback |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I really don't see why people feel the need to criticise spelling: it's off putting.
OP, at my age I have the attention of a goldfish so I lost interest half way through. However, I tried again and...ooooooh shiny things...
Ah, where was I?!! Oh yes, it's different, so you'll stand out to those seeking you.
Good lu...oooooooh cake! |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I really don't see why people feel the need to criticise spelling: it's off putting.
OP, at my age I have the attention of a goldfish so I lost interest half way through. However, I tried again and...ooooooh shiny things...
Ah, where was I?!! Oh yes, it's different, so you'll stand out to those seeking you.
Good lu...oooooooh cake! "
She has cake!  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Firstly, "discrete" means individual or separate. I suspect you meant "discreet", which means careful about privacy.
The FAQ is different and more interesting than a block of text, but I think a lot of what you've included in it is unnecessary.
Q1: Nobody is going to say they are not genuine, so this is redundant.
Q2: As already mentioned, I don't see the connection between being discreet and sharing the cost of a hotel. I'd just add, "can accommodate but also willing to share the cost of a hotel", to your main profile text.
Q3: Fair enough, though "3sum" rather than "threesome" makes me cringe.
Q4: You've already said you're straight. If they ignored that, they'll probably ignore this too.
Q5: You've already said you always practice safe sex.
Q6: This Q&A seems a bit pointless.
Q7: I'd take this out and just add "always shaven" to an appropriate bit of the profile text.
Q8: This made me laugh!
Q9: Fair enough.
The interests section is good. The photos are good.
Above average, overall and I can't see any reason it shouldn't be successful."
Made some changes based on your advice:
Agree with Q1, Q2, Q3.
Q4, Q5 are there in the way of 'reinforcement'. Some don't read a profile paragraph properly, or need extra reassurance before committing to an email conversation.
Not sure about Q6. Leaving it for now to mull it over, I have it there because of 'shybies'. Some people are embarrassed about a particular fetish, sexual preferences can be very personal, sensitive things, so I'm just trying to sound extra friendly to them to bring them out of their shells, blinking into the sunlight of swinging :D
Agree with Q7.
Thanks for your contribution!  |
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By *iewMan
over a year ago
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you may find the 98 year old you seek may forget about the meet she agrees to..
you may find the 18 year old you seek forget about the meet she agrees to as the Next Sales starts early..
no offence meant to 98 and 18 year olds..
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"why do older ladies have more experience?
do you mean in life or sexually?
Both
you may find that is not always the case"
I may, but it is less likely. In any case, if horny young 18 year old girls descend upon me in droves, I don't think I'll be fighting them off, so you need not worry too much  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"why do older ladies have more experience?
do you mean in life or sexually?
Both
you may find that is not always the case
I may, but it is less likely. In any case, if horny young 18 year old girls descend upon me in droves, I don't think I'll be fighting them off, so you need not worry too much "
Horny 18 y/.o girls? on here? You'll be lucky. The only horny 18y/o girls I've seen on here are all called 'tina' have have a cock. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Putting it on the right forum post might help too, like the Introductions one which is where this should be
says who?
i was unaware that there was a correct place to post a thread for advice on your profile"
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By *he tactile technicianMan
over a year ago
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"Putting it on the right forum post might help too, like the Introductions one which is where this should be
says who?
i was unaware that there was a correct place to post a thread for advice on your profile"
Absolutely! the lounge shouldn't be for having your ego feathered, or else we;d be over run with young media study kids circumventing the pay as you go profile advice service! We can't have that now can we? the older woman on here is now having to contemplate working till she's 66, the least we can do is promote our profile advice service and contribute to her pension contributions shortfall. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Well I think its fine, you've made an effort and taken time and thought to put in there a lot of info about you.
Pics are nice too, good looking young guy.
How old is a mature woman, am I one, and if so why don't I feel it.
Oh and I forgot to say a big hello to the spelling police out in force on this thread |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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right had a peek and i can honestly say i like it
everyone has their personal likes and dislikes when it comes to what they are looking for in a profile
what is it they say
you can't please all of the people all of the time
there is no perfect profile but personally i find yours to be a good un it tells me plenty
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By *he tactile technicianMan
over a year ago
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"Hello fellow swinger comrades!
I put some effort into making a decent profile, but it can be challenging to see from the perspective of a lady or couple.
http://www.fabswingers.com/profile/adarkhorse
Please tell us what you'd change, and also what photo you'd prefer to be used as the avatar. If folk consistently feel that something needs alteration I'm happy to do so.
So;
A: What would you change?
B: What would you add/subtract from it?
TIA!
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May I firstly suggest you lose the communist overtone salutation. many fab forumnites here are either children of the cold war era, or else still conceived within living memory of the menace of the hammer and sickle. Apart from the obvious tell tale signs that really don't endere you to intelligent articulate folk, such as the text speak, and the profile compiled as if you're writing content in an html editor, you're doing pretty well for a youngster, be individual and creative, if it works for you then it probably works for everyone else, remember individualism is attractive within itself - don't labour the approval shit, it soon makes you look as if you are hankering to the desires of others - not a nice look at all
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By *ENDAROOSCouple
over a year ago
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Had a peek and thought it was pretty good...gives me an idea of what you like and are looking for.
But wouldn't worry too much about what everyone else thinks, if your happy with it, then that's all that matters.
You will never please everyone....no matter how hard you try!
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Give the lad a break hes 24 at uni meet space is limited and wow a very sexy guy he deffinately stands out of the crowd he has put the effort in to his profile has been chatting in the forums etc a lot more than some keep going hun you doing a grand job. Rainbow party anyone.... |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Give the lad a break hes 24 at uni meet space is limited and wow a very sexy guy he deffinately stands out of the crowd he has put the effort in to his profile has been chatting in the forums etc a lot more than some keep going hun you doing a grand job. Rainbow party anyone...."
thanks shaz! and rainbow parties are the best, mmmmmmmmh |
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"Give the lad a break hes 24 at uni meet space is limited and wow a very sexy guy he deffinately stands out of the crowd he has put the effort in to his profile has been chatting in the forums etc a lot more than some keep going hun you doing a grand job. Rainbow party anyone....
thanks shaz! and rainbow parties are the best, mmmmmmmmh "
i so hope that's nothing to do with rainbow kisses! |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Give the lad a break hes 24 at uni meet space is limited and wow a very sexy guy he deffinately stands out of the crowd he has put the effort in to his profile has been chatting in the forums etc a lot more than some keep going hun you doing a grand job. Rainbow party anyone....
thanks shaz! and rainbow parties are the best, mmmmmmmmh
i so hope that's nothing to do with rainbow kisses! "
Maybe rainbow lipstick on the cock lol |
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By *iewMan
over a year ago
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I think the OP has done a good job really, he has joined in with the rest of the forums, bantered, started other threads..
some just ask........ and you never hear from them again.. well until they moan next.
good luck |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"I think the OP has done a good job really, he has joined in with the rest of the forums, bantered, started other threads..
some just ask........ and you never hear from them again.. well until they moan next.
good luck "
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