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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Hi there guys can you have a look at my profile and critique it for me, let me know what you like and dont like and where i can improve it cheers

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

You mention you can accommodate twice.. you also mention you can travel but the travel status is set to cannot travel.... confusing.

Also... you have managed to take a super clear picture of your cock.. twice. It would be fantastic if your face picture was as clear a shot.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

as profiles go it's ok

you could do with checking the grammar and punctuation as it reads a bit funny

also I'd put the cock pics in your private folder and bring them out when asked...

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Hi there guys can you have a look at my profile and critique it for me, let me know what you like and dont like and where i can improve it cheers "

It is alright, though I would delete the claim to be "educated," unless you correct your grammar and spelling.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

thank you taken all above on board, take a look now let me know what you think

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"thank you taken all above on board, take a look now let me know what you think "

As per my previous comment.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

you say you 'love a sub with the right woman' ..do you eat in or takeaway?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"you say you 'love a sub with the right woman' ..do you eat in or takeaway? "

oh, and now you have too many face pics...

less is more!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I think it's fine except I also thought too many face pics XXX

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

I like to cook and in process of reducing face pics x

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By *rightonsteveMan  over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Face pics are good but you could have more variety of photos and you say you're intelligent AND educated. That's over egging the pudding a bit. Lots of sentences start with "I" so to make the read more interesting for the reader, you might like to consider having a variety of sentences.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

You list the things you are into. Just a bit about yourself and characteristics. Try to make it interesting.

So many people have a profile that reads like the declaration of Independence.

A few photos too. Not just your cock.

Ladies know what they look like.

Good luck.

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