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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi Guys,
I posted a thread earlier about improvements to my profile
Could you guys just give me some feedback of what you think so I can gauge if its had the desired effect?"
far too many 'in terms of'
apart from that I think you think you are far too intellectual for fab...
try getting over yourself and taking it all a little less seriously..seriously! |
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By *edylogos OP Man
over a year ago
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To be honest I am as down to earth as it comes... I did have a quick browse of your profile and saw that you've actually quoted Michelangelo - Not many people go around quoting renaissance Italian artist.
To be honest that wasn't what I was going for, but it its a true reflection of my personality. I am a undercover geek and i'm proud of that fact! but thank you for the advice and have a cracking weekend |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"To be honest I am as down to earth as it comes... I did have a quick browse of your profile and saw that you've actually quoted Michelangelo - Not many people go around quoting renaissance Italian artist.
To be honest that wasn't what I was going for, but it its a true reflection of my personality. I am a undercover geek and i'm proud of that fact! but thank you for the advice and have a cracking weekend "
you too....and maybe dumb it down a bit |
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By *edylogos OP Man
over a year ago
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Well I wasn't including that line about Einstein to say ooo look at me, It was more to show that I'm actually just a contradiction in terms, if you met me out in a pub you would assume that I could count two pennies because on face value I'm just a standard 30 year old bloke. However this has been useful and the last thing I want to do is come across as a snobbish prick as I'm really not... Anyway thank you for the advice and Ill make some tweaks |
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You could improve your photos.
The text per se is good enough although when one says 'genuine' I always add the word 'wanker' on the end because it's meaningless in this context and if you use the word 'intelligent' make an effort to spell things correctly and make sure your grammar and punctuation is perfect. For example, 'Rubix' should be 'Rubik's' after the guy who invented it. 'Relativity' has a capital R, etc etc.
When one says 'intelligent' and I spot mistakes, I think 'intelligent as a slug'
Mainly good though. |
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"Hi Guys,
I posted a thread earlier about improvements to my profile
Could you guys just give me some feedback of what you think so I can gauge if its had the desired effect?
far too many 'in terms of'
apart from that I think you think you are far too intellectual for fab...
try getting over yourself and taking it all a little less seriously..seriously!"
Those were my thoughts. You are not auditioning for a spot on mastermind. Put the cock shot as private as one cock looks the same as another and with women and couples it's not always about what your cock looks like.
Also remember that you are a single guy and as such one of many so couples and single women have much more people to choose from that you do so don't be desperate.
You also might want to try visiting a few swingers clubs as you will make more acquaintances there than you would here. Loads of clubs have nights were single guys are more than welcome. |
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