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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Ok, here goes!
Personally the profile is a tad too long, take out that you moved back in with mum and dad! Oh, and the unemployed bit, you've got work now, so it's not an issue. Also, are you REALLY into swinging or looking for a gf? It sounds like a dating site profile, especially the 'sloppy hugs and kisses' at the end.
And feel you might be limiting yourself with the age limit too.
Just my opinion.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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This is Ms here and it made me laugh! I like to see a profile with a sense of humour plus I like the photos as they show what you look like and that will make you stand out amongst the many single guys on here. Good luck on here. x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I really like it...it's honest, down to earth with a little bit of humour too. The type of profile I like to read if I get a message frrom someone xxx"
agreed Shame more men aren't so open with words and pics
Love your pics xx |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Ok, here goes!
Personally the profile is a tad too long, take out that you moved back in with mum and dad! Oh, and the unemployed bit, you've got work now, so it's not an issue. Also, are you REALLY into swinging or looking for a gf? It sounds like a dating site profile, especially the 'sloppy hugs and kisses' at the end.
And feel you might be limiting yourself with the age limit too.
Just my opinion. "
No probs, I did ask for critisism and yours was constructive......
Thanks to everyone else too  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Personally I think it's fine. Avoids the "why can't you accomodate" accusations. And I'd not say it's too long, it doesn't drag like some.
I hide my shame with my 'axe murderer' line instead...   "
I hope u don't mind if i nick a few lines m8..................... |
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By *ibrosMan
over a year ago
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I read it start to finish. It can't be too long, I don't have the attention span. No profile is going to be perfect. Parts will attract some and other parts others (look, I know what I mean).
You can't please everyone. Stick with it. Its what you wrote. |
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ie re write and an edit of public photos.
Anyone care to offer some constructive criticism?
Ta