"Does our profile sound inviting "
Not really.....the capitals are very 'shouty' - just block those who you don't want to meet and when people say they are 'professional' it makes me think of our professional plumber. He does a good job and is quite reasonable. I didn't bother reading past the capitals. |
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Capitals always sound like you are screaming your point at the reader. Other than that, it's okay. As an above poster said, you are getting meets, so it must be inviting  |
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You have a lot of good veris which means you are doing something right. Personally for me, I found it a bit ranty and also would be turned off by the fem play with men watching, however I'm sure there will be others that like that play so I wish you continued good luck  |
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"Thank you all our profile has been updated hope it reads better "
I just read it so I don't know how bad it was before, but I'd say no need to use 'unique' 3 times  |
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There's still a couple of typos and as others have said the "put move in subject" always puts us off profiles.
That said it's nit picking and it reads much better than before |
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"There's still a couple of typos and as others have said the "put move in subject" always puts us off profiles.
That said it's nit picking and it reads much better than before "
It's a very sweet one now. You both come across as friendly and approachable with sexy pictures to boot |
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"There's still a couple of typos and as others have said the "put move in subject" always puts us off profiles.
That said it's nit picking and it reads much better than before
It's a very sweet one now. You both come across as friendly and approachable with sexy pictures to boot "
Thank you for your kind comments |
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