"What exactly is it about my profile that isn't exactly catching as much attention as one would like any help or advice would be appriciated"
Lose the meaningless legal nonsense which totally dominates the profile, especially as it's written in block capitals.
Concentrate on presenting more of yourself in a relaxed conversational style, avoiding any extravagant claims. Just be yourself. |
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As you indicate that there is more to be said, you would do better to outline a few more aspects about yourself rather than expect enquiries from others.
Lay more out in the shop window rather than relying on people coming into the shop. |
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'There is a lot more to say about me but I think it's better to leave that for those who are interested to find out.'
Women get so many messages you might find they'll prefer to chat with someone who puts more on their profile than the one who says the above.
I like to have more info up front to know if I'd be interested but that's just me. |
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"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated "
Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).
You really do need to check your spelling, though. |
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"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated
Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).
You really do need to check your spelling, though."
Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth
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"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated
Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).
You really do need to check your spelling, though.Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth
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Do you feel the need to state that the sun is hot? That the grass is green? Those statements might be true but they would not enhance your profile. |
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"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated
Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).
You really do need to check your spelling, though.Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth
Do you feel the need to state that the sun is hot? Thuat the grass is green? Those statements might be true but they would not enhance your profile."
Well we all have different ways to express our feelings and opinion and length in which we do
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"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated
Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).
You really do need to check your spelling, though.Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth
Do you feel the need to state that the sun is hot? Thuat the grass is green? Those statements might be true but they would not enhance your profile.
Well we all have different ways to express our feelings and opinion and length in which we do
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Then feel free to ignore my advice. |
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"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated
Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).
You really do need to check your spelling, though.Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth
Do you feel the need to state that the sun is hot? Thuat the grass is green? Those statements might be true but they would not enhance your profile.
Well we all have different ways to express our feelings and opinion and length in which we do
Then feel free to ignore my advice."
Surly not ignoring it taking it on borad but I also have some of my own opinions which I stick to.
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