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over a year ago
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"Hi was just wondering if people could give me a few pointers on improving my profile and there views on it thanks  "
Write a proper profile. One that will be attractive to people reading it. Yes, we know you want sex. But what do you offer? What makes you the one to choose? What is your personality? Why can't you accommodate and what alternative do you suggest?
Write proper sentences and make sure the grammar and spelling is correct. Don't use text speak
Have no more than one cock shot (and, please, take your socks off). Take some imaginative body shots or smartly dressed shots. |
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Replace your pictures with a couple of tasteful body shots and just write a bit about yourself and what you can offer. Have a read through it afterwards and where you pause or the subject changes put a full stop, it makes it easier to read.
Good luck |
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Do a search of the forums, there is a lot of good advice on them re profiles. As yours stands op it's very poor indeed. Way too many cock pics, no avatar pic, no grammar or punctuation in the few words you have. Best of luck  |
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Surely you don't need to approach the forum to work out that your profile text is quite badly written - I'm sure you you wouldn't apply for a job using text speak!
I guess as you are new to this you didn't realise that very few women will choose a sex partner based on a collection of cock pics, and that a hell of a lot of women will automatically delete the type of profile that are 'all cock'. |
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Better photos, not all of your cock. Punctuate and spell correctly. If you read a female profile worded exactly the same as yours with equivalent photos, would you drop her a line or would you move on to someone who had put a tad of effort in?
I often wonder if people can't put effort, originality and creativity into a profile whether or not this lacklustre lazy approach will translate into other aspects of their performance. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Would you mind taking a look at mine as well, please? x"
Sounds like a crap 1970's romance novel - and start your own thread. The OP asked for advice, not you.t |
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"Hi was just wondering if people could give me a few pointers on improving my profile and there views on it thanks
Write a proper profile. One that will be attractive to people reading it. Yes, we know you want sex. But what do you offer? What makes you the one to choose? What is your personality? Why can't you accommodate and what alternative do you suggest?
Write proper sentences and make sure the grammar and spelling is correct. Don't use text speak
Have no more than one cock shot (and, please, take your socks off). Take some imaginative body shots or smartly dressed shots."
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