Looks fine to me. Honest and friendly. You could put a little extra in about why someone should choose you and make sure your spelling and sentence construction is top notch. Some people say it doesn't matter but no need to put up barriers to those for which it does. |
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over a year ago
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In our opinion, its quiet poor, we would move on to the next one,
3 photos, dressed photo good, an out of focus cock pic and the other not sure what its meant to be looks like to bums together :-0
text repetitious in 2 lines you repeat thet your bi and single twices, apart from that it does not say much, apart that you have a bi lady who could join you |
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I will be honest it's not good, cock pics aren't good at the best of times yours is blurry, I don't get the bums together pic at all, put some decent pics up ( one decent cock pic is more then enough for anyone's profile so some body pics would be nice) your txt needs more info what your like as a person, what your like as a lover, what your looking for on here. You really need to sell yourself and appeal to people. |
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over a year ago
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"Hello,thank you for being totally honest with me.I have revamped it.could you take another look?
Many thanks Jeff"
Your first sentence is negative and redundant.
The rest says very little indeed.
Imagine you are a lady who looks at 20 profiles. What would make yours stand out? |
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