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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Scariest post on the forums ever for us! Lol
But as the title suggests, we'd love some feedback on our profile.
I read it again earlier, for the first time in a while, and nearly bored myself! Lol so did some editing and cut some back.
Yet it still seems too much? Trying to get as much relevant information about us across to the reader as possible without sounding boring or being boring....
Don't feel we're succeeding too well 
Constructive critism or advice would be much appreciated and great fully received. X |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Imo it is a great profile. Yes a little long but everything relevant so I don't mind that. It is obvious you haven't copied and pasted sections so your personality comes through a little, and you are certain about what you are looking for without being closed to things. (Shame about no looking for single males  ) lol
My one suggestion would be try to improve the quality of your photos. Better lighting would help a lot  |
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The first paragraph (after the 'no friend requests' warning) went on a little too long about your relationship as a couple..
Then you briefly mentioned your swinging desires but by then I had totally switched off as I had scanned down my phone to find the ending.
May I suggest you cut it back a little more |
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